Edited on 09/26/2011. Posted on 09/26/2011.
Hello I'm kinda new and I want YOU (does the whole pointing thing) to give me feedback. Instead of a movie whatever Im writng a script for a manga novel...(its pretty much a movie but in a book) and I want feedback to see if it interests you..my parents are useless because they dont like the genre ad my friends are too nice to give constructive feedback...you guys are like...perfect.. anyway I want feedback on the scenes and the plot outline....i havent started the script. its on this link: http://www.plotbot.com/screenplays/projectangel/