Yea I dont know dude, it seems like it could be funny but it seems a little cliche. The idea of the manual for college dating is funny but the opening scene is something like I feel like I've seen dozens of times before.
Cliche or not it is definitely something that people can relate to. The opening scene is hilarious the way James describes the men. I think that this will be something that can reach several markets, high schoolers, college chicks, maybe even the bored housewife that longs for her youth. I say go with it, I am going to continue reading everything. if you need any help let me know and I will let you know what I can do.
