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bulls424

on 03/28/2009

I just joined and have an idea

Four 17 year old kids who are best friends, drop out of high school and decide to form their own mafia. They are able to get some guns and they start doing what mafias do. After a while they've picked up new members and the biger mafia gets nervous because they are competeing over land, so there is a war. In the end...

threeinch4head

on 04/14/2009

wow world war 3 mafia style

Juanclark26

Edited on 04/16/2009. Posted on 04/16/2009.

I like your idea. You should try reasearching the mafia family. Change the title of screenplay. It should be more clever and appealing. I have some idea's about your story. But who is the main character male or female. Whats the theme of your story. Just brainstorming to help you with ideas.

Juanclark26

on 04/16/2009

The oldest of the mafia teenagers nicknamed the The Beast because of his violent temper forged a coalition of mafia clan known as the (?), with himself as its leader. He initiated a campaign to dominate the streets that were ran by outsiders and its narcotics trade.

Well thats all I can come up with for now.
Until next time

Uniform72

on 04/21/2009

You can call the Mafia clan 'Relentless" since they are pursuing their dream of infamy and fortune. Sounds like a great idea. I'll see if I can come up with additional ideas. Good luck my friend.

vivalahero

on 04/28/2009

thats actually a really good idea. love it. I look forward to seeing it develop.

dinnadoit

two years ago

Instantly thought of "Once Upon a Time in America", maybe a modern take on that kind of story would be a nice touch.
You should read "The Illumination of Merton Brown" it may help you with Ideas and maybe some inspiration. Good Luck.

Ramin82

two years ago

Go for it Bulls. To borrow a phrase from one of the posts I saw somewhere on this website, 'Just get it finished!!'

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