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olliemacis edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. olliemacis made 14 other changes. more
The British soldier is patrolling a dirt track up to a hut. The Afghani is leaning over a table preparing an explosive. The Afghani looks up and hastily grabs his gun. He pushes the door open and walks out. The British soldier and the Taliban lock eyes. In Slow Motion we see both bring their guns up. now in close up we see them load. cock. unlock safety. The finger curled around the trigger beigins to flex. Then there is a close up on both faces with the gun pressed against their cheeks. A gun shot is heard but the screen cuts to black.
olliemacis added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. olliemacis made 10 other changes. more
Both boys aged 16 sit nervously on a chair within in an interview room. The British boy is being interviewed by army officials in formal dress. The Afghani is interviewed in less formal circumstances by men with guns and ammunition slug across their shoulders. A contract is slid across the table towards the British boy. He looks at the interviewer in the eye briefly before signing the contract. He stands shakes hands with interviewer and exits the room. An AK-74u is slid towards the Afghani boy, hesitantly he picks it up and him and the interviewer embrace.
olliemacis edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. olliemacis made 12 other changes. more
The British boy aged 12 now, is sat in the living room in his families council house. Watching BBC news of the killing of British soliders by taliban and reports on terrorism attacks. The Afghnai boy is in his living room looking out the window in fear as British and American soldiers patrol up down his road heavily armed.
olliemacis added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. more
Cheering and clapping are followed with the occasional flash from cameras. Simultaneously
olliemacis added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. olliemacis made 9 other changes. more
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