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lolita1975 added an action in "This is your first scene." 7 months ago. lolita1975 made 12 other changes. more
Danny looks around sullenly as the color drips out of the scene and everything returns to black and white. He lowers his eyes to the ground and mutters and indistinct "nevermind" before shoving his hands in his pockets and begins walking back down the sidewalk, leaving Anna to watch him leave with a worried look.
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As Anna's hand hits Danny, he sits up straight with a shocked expression.
lolita1975 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 7 months ago. lolita1975 made 2 other changes. more
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(V.O)
It always began the same, my friends and I would go out and I would be pushed and nudged towards some fairly attractive girl at the end of the bar.
lolita1975 edited an action in "This is your first scene." 7 months ago. lolita1975 made 4 other changes. more
The young man enters the park the following day, hands in pockets, sullen expression. He makes his way past the same athletes, the same trees, the same children. Paying no attention to the feeling of deja vu that sweeps over him. He steps past the children playing in the sun and makes his way, evenly paced, to the same green park bench where he rested the day before. The young man looks around quizically, unable to pinpoint the familiarity of the scene. He shakes his head as if brushing off the thought.
lolita1975 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 7 months ago. more
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It's very disappointing.
 

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