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iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. iankittcamera made 41 other changes.
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Miss, stay calm. I need you to stay still until the paramedics can take a look at you.
iankittcamera deleted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia leans against the boot of the car. Officer Lewis walks over, breathalyser in hand.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer brown
Miss, stay calm. I need you to stay still until the paramedics can take a look at you.
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
sofia
I should have never come to this country
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia shakes her head
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She peers at the bruising on her arms, sighs, then beats the steering wheel. Officer Brown looks on.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in the seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes and sees blue flashing lights in the rear view mirror, her eyes flit forwards as she avoids acknowledgement of Officer Brown. The Officer taps again. Sofia continues to stare forwards.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
SOFIA (quietly)
Why didn't I listen?
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in the seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes and sees blue flashing lights in the rear view mirror, her eyes flit forwards as she avoids acknowledgement of Officer Brown. The Officer taps again. Sofia sits cold eyed gazing forward.
iankittcamera deleted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia sits cold eyed gazing forward.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Madame, please unwind your window
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia (cont)
I should never have come to this country.
iankittcamera inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia (cont)
I should never have come to this country.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
SOFIA
Why didn't I listen?
iankittcamera deleted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
(low shot from the vodka to the police officer Officer Brown notices a bottle of vodka.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She peers down at the bruising on her arms. Frustrated, she beats the steering wheel. Officer Brown looks on.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She peers down at the bruising on her arms. Frustrated, she beats the steering wheel. Officer Brown looks on
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown (cont)
Miss, I won't ask again, unwind your window. Immediately.
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Morning Madam, I need you to stay very still until the paramedics arrive
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer brown
Please, don't move. You might have a neck injury. Let's wait for the paramedics to arrive.
iankittcamera inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
sofia
I should have never come to this country
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Miss, stay calm. I need you to stay still until the paramedics can take a look at you.
iankittcamera inserted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He tries to open the door. Locked.
iankittcamera added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Miss, I won't ask again, unwind your window. Immediately.
iankittcamera inserted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Frustrated, she beats the steering wheel
iankittcamera deleted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Frustrated, she beats the steering wheel
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia
Why didn't I listen
iankittcamera deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
SOFIA
Why didn't I listen?
iankittcamera inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
SOFIA
Why didn't I listen?
iankittcamera inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia
Why didn't I listen
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
SOFIA
Why didn't I listen?
iankittcamera added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown (cont)
Miss, I won't ask again, unwind your window. Immediately.
iankittcamera inserted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Sofia sits cold eyed gazing forward.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in the seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes and sees blue flashing lights in the rear view mirror, her eyes flit forwards as she avoids acknowledgement of Officer Brown. The Officer taps again.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Morning Madame, please unwind your window
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in the seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes, blue lights flash through the rear window and Officer Brown leans in at her window.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in her seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes, blue lights flash through the rear window and Officer Brown leans in at her window.
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
(low shot from the vodka to the police officer Officer Brown notices a bottle of vodka.
iankittcamera edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Morning Madam, I need you to stay very still until the paramedics arrive
iankittcamera added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Officer Brown
Madam, I need you to stay very still until the paramedics arrive
iankittcamera edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She undoes her seatbelt and closes her eyes as she leans back in her seat. Moments later, there is a loud tap on her window, Sofia opens her eyes, blue lights flash through the rear window and Officer Brown is at her window
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