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Quick pitch

This is an opening scene from a stage play. It is about a specific community of people and how they shape the lives of a little girl named Afrika (she doesn't appear in this scene).

In this scene, the community is grieving for a young teenage boy who was gunned down in a neighborhood shooting. The camera follows along as different community members express their thoughts on who is to blame, the issue of black on black crime, and their anger with the situation.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

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But it is impossible to repair broken men who are self-inflicting.
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Mother
Don't look at me like you know me. Like this is my fault. This is your fault.
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She stares into the camera longer than is comfortable for the viewer.
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She looks into the camera.
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Girl
And who taught their parents? And where were you when we were being taught wrong?
 

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