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lovers quarrel

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jessicala edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/10/2009. jessicala made 6 other changes. more
BOBBY
I- I can't do this anymore. WE can't do this anymore. I don't have the same feelings anymore and it's not fair for me, or you, to keep dragging this out any longer. We've been doing this for seven years! seven years! Trixie, I broke you again, I know. And there is no excuse for what I'm doing to you.
jessicala added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/05/2009. jessicala made 18 other changes. more
TRIXIE
And I can't be your friend. A part of me inside dies everytime I hear you went to the movies with another girl. I've cried more in the past year then I have in my entire life, because of you. I can't be your firend and be happy at the same time. Please, i can't keep doing this. Please.
jessicala added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/04/2009. jessicala made 55 other changes. more
BOBBY
God damnit Trixie! say something! i'm goign crazy over here!
jessicala added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/02/2009. jessicala made 33 other changes. more
HOLLAND walks over to the box once again and puts his left foot in first then his right, suddenly there is no bottom to the box, HOLLAND falls for a long time before he hits something soft. It's a puffy cloud, and all around him are bright colors; mountains of gold, trees a vibrant green, water sparkling royal blue. he hears the sounds of his sisters laughter. TRIXE is standing under a tall willow tree with a rather strange looking character.
jessicala deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/02/2009. jessicala made 49 other changes. more
BOBBY
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