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FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011. FordSeeuws made 44 other changes.
FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
brandon
Let's get to work.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
One second everyone. Guys, I need you all to do me a favor. Let's cut the crap for a second. This film is not going to look good on your demo reel. This film is not going to win any awards. Not going to make any money, and is probably going to be seen by less people than one of wonderboy's videos gets. Good impersonation of me in the last one by the way. We can ask the existential questions all day about why we're here, but let's be honest- We're here for the work and the possibility of more work. And the more work me and Ros are dedicated to at this point is a pet project that has very little chance of seeing its day, and that's what we're doing here, making this film as a favor in exchange for a few opportunities to shop our dream film. If this film gets a nod from the powers that be, then all you are welcome to join us on it even you Katherine. Apologies for my outburst just a minute ago. If there's one thing you trust me on in the course of this shoot or defer to me on, is that you believe me that our next project has legs, I promise you. It may not change the filmmaking world, but it will change our careers, I guarantee it. So tonight I need you just to do your jobs with all the presence you can muster, without second-guessing, without looking out for ways to advance your career, just keep the place safe and running like clockwork. Put your nose to the grindstone and do the work. If we work as a group and start gelling maybe we can advance our collective careers here. Tonight we get an audience with a man who is not one of the powers that be who can okay our film, but his support and his ear will go a long way towards seeing it get made. So twenty minutes tonight may be worth more than the sum total of the rest of this project. So are you guys with me?
FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Joss Whedon.
FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
jeremy
Who is it?
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
One second everyone. Guys, I need you all to do me a favor. Let's cut the crap for a second. This film is not going to look good on your demo reel. This film is not going to win any awards. Not going to make any money, and is probably going to be seen by less people than one of wonderboy's videos gets. Good impersonation of me in the last one by the way. We can ask the existential questions all day about why we're here, but let's be honest- We're here for the work and the possibility of more work. And the more work me and Ros are dedicated to at this point is a pet project that has very little chance of seeing its day, and that's what we're doing here, making this film as a favor in exchange for a few opportunities to shop our dream film. If this film gets a nod from the powers that be, then all you are welcome to join us on it even you Katherine. Apologies for my outburst just a minute ago. If there's one thing you trust me on in the course of this shoot or defer to me on, is that you believe me that our next project has legs, I promise you. It may not change the filmmaking world, but it will change our careers, I guarantee it. So tonight I need you just to do your jobs with all the presence you can muster, without second-guessing, without looking out for ways to advance your career, just keeping the place safe and running like clockwork. If we work as a group and start gelling maybe we can advance our collective careers here. Tonight we get an audience with a man who is not one of the powers that be who can okay our film, but his support and his ear will go a long way towards seeing it get made. So twenty minutes tonight may be worth more than the sum total of the rest of this project.
FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
One second everyone. Guys, I need you all to do me a favor. Let's cut the crap for a second. This film is not going to look good on your demo reel. This film is not going to win any awards. Not going to make any money, and is probably going to be seen by less people than one of wonderboy's videos gets. Good impersonation of me in the last one by the way. We can ask the existential questions all day about why we're here, but let's be honest- We're here for the work and the possibility of more work. And the more work me and Ros are dedicated to at this point is a pet project that has very little chance of seeing its day, and that's what we're doing here, making this film as a favor in exchange for a few opportunities to shop our dream film. If this film gets a nod from the powers that be, then all you are welcome to join us
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As Brandon starts to walk off, Doc walks up with most of the rest of the crew.
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Ryan hurries over to the grip crew.
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doc
I need a second.
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This rocks the Extra to her core.
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Doc whirls around and motions to Rosalyn.
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doc
I need a second.
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Doc whirls around and to Rosalyn:
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
This rocks the Extra to her core.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Whatever you want. And you, your line is "Oh," -you need motivation for that? YOu say, "Oh," if you need help with that maybe you need to look into another profession.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Ditch all the changes. Keep it the way we had it please. This isn't Casablanca. We just need to get through it. I need all of you to put on your game faces, and let's just do this thing.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Whatever you want. And
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
ryan
The light?
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Ditch all the changes. Keep it the way we had it please. This isn't Casablanca. We just need to get through it. I need all of you to put on your game faces, and let's do this thing.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
He looks at Radika.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Doc hangs up the phone as Rosalyn returns.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Well, that would be great. You guys come right on. No, no, no, it would be problem. He knows his way around a set. He won't be in the way at all. Great. Look forward to it.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
A long pause as the music lowers significantly as everyone seems to realize that the boss is not happy.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
A long pause as the music lowers significantly, and as everyone seems to realize that the boss is not happy.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
DOC
Yeah, I'm sorry, Marcus. Just in the thick of things.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
The extra stands nearby awkwardly.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Rosalyn exchanges an almost frightened look with Radika as she runs off.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Excuse me...[to no one and everyone in particular] HEY! Keep it down! What is this?! Ros-tell them to shut up!
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
extra
Hey I'm sorry to bother you. I'm really excited to be here, and I'm just wondering what my motivation should be.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
doc
Hello.
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As he goes to answer it, music at the adjacent bar, which seems to be serving as a base of operations begins blaring.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Doc stares at her blankly as he answers his phone.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
A girl hurries up to Doc and taps his arm slightly.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Doc stares at her b
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Doc's phone rings, and he begins to reach for it.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
DOC
Ryan, I just don't think it's that big of a deal, man.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
Someone hurries up to Doc and taps his arm slightly.
FordSeeuws added dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
extra
I'm just wondering what my motivation should be.
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Doc is now having a discussion with a new face.
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CUT TO:
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Ryan hurries over.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
brandon
Idiots. So I was up on this catwalk as a safety to walk alongside her. Some idiot, forgive me youtube, PA didn't sandbag the Blonde properly, and it was full up. Tipped. Hit her counterweight, and the grip holding it. Knocked him out clean, liked to kill him. She falls. Headfirst, no padding because the idiot had the track going right under her.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
sara
We went out. He was like a cliche of what you expect an actor to act like. I almost got the feeling he was like in character working on his role, and I was just extended method acting practice fodder or something. It was weird.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/09/2011 [view]
jeremy
Look, I was being a douche, I got it. But I've paid...some of my dues, okay?
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