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FordSeeuws added a slugline in "Hidden in Plain Sight" on 12/16/2011. FordSeeuws made 35 other changes.
FordSeeuws added a slugline in "Hidden in Plain Sight" on 12/16/2011 [view]
INT. EXT. SET - NIGHT
FordSeeuws added a new scene titled "Hidden in Plain Sight" on 12/16/2011
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
doc (CONT'D)
One second everyone. Guys, I need you all to do me a favor. Let's cut the crap for a second. This film is not going to look good on your demo reel. This film is not going to win any awards. Not going to make any money, and is probably going to be seen by less people than one of wonderboy's videos gets. Good impersonation of me in the last one by the way. We can ask the existential questions all day about why we're here, but let's be honest- We're here for the work and the possibility of more work. And the "more work" me and Ros are dedicated to at this point is a pet project that has very little chance of seeing its day, and that's what we're doing here, making this film as a favor in exchange for a few opportunities to shop our dream film. If this film gets a nod from the powers that be, then all you are welcome to join us on it even you Katherine. Apologies for my outburst just a minute ago. If there's one thing you trust me on in the course of this shoot or defer to me on, is that you believe me that our next project has legs, I promise you. It may not change the filmmaking world, but it will change our careers, I guarantee it. So tonight I need you just to do your jobs with all the presence you can muster, without second-guessing, without looking out for ways to advance your career, just keep the place safe and running like clockwork. Put your nose to the grindstone and do the work. If we work as a group and start gelling maybe we can advance our collective careers here. Tonight we get an audience with a man who is not one of the powers that be who can okay our film, but his support and his ear will go a long way towards seeing it get made. So twenty minutes tonight may be worth more than the sum total of the rest of this project. So are you guys with me?
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
brandon
Well, we're all just learning something today aren't we? Come on Youtube. We have a mission.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
ryan
It's too yellow for the scene. If you want to shimmy up to gel then be my guest.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Doc whirls around and motions to Rosalyn to follow him.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
doc (CONT'D)
Well, that would be great. You guys come right on. No, no, no, it wouldn't be problem. He knows his way around a set. He won't be in the way at all. Great. Look forward to it.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
A long pause as the music lowers significantly, and everyone turns to look at Doc.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
The extra fidgets with her sleeve and looks around nervously as she tries to make her exit look natural.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
The extra stands nearby looking awkward and dejected.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Doc stares at her blankly. He is about to answer his phone, but pauses momentarily.
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
brandon
Well we're all just learning something aren't we? Youtube, we've got a mission.
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
jeremy
Hearing a creative decision that makes no logistical and little creative sense.
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
brandon
What?
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
jeremy
So, that's what it looks like, huh?
FordSeeuws deleted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Jeremy smiles.
FordSeeuws deleted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Ryan walks away, and Brandon glares.
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
ryan
If you got the balls to shimmy up the pole and gel it, go for it. It's too yellow for the shot.
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Brandon
What about that street light?
FordSeeuws deleted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
RYAN
Yeah, we'd like a light across the road there, just to put a little something to twinkle in the background. Like a street light.
FordSeeuws deleted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Ryan hurries over to the grip crew.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
As Brandon starts to walk off, Doc approaches with the rest of the crew.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
brandon
Well, we're all just learning something today aren't way? Come on Youtube. We have a mission.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Jeremy
A directorial decision that takes a ton of work and makes very little sense.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Brandon
What?
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
jeremy
So that's what it looks like, huh?
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Jeremy grins.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Ryan walks away, and Brandon shakes his head.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
ryan
It's too yellow. If you want to shimmy up to gel then be my guest.
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
brandon
Uh, what about the street light?
FordSeeuws inserted dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
ryan
Yeah we'd like a light over there in the background to look like a street light.
FordSeeuws inserted an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Ryan hurries over to the grip crew.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
doc
Whatever you want.
FordSeeuws edited dialogue in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
doc
[To EXTRA] You have one line that's one word. If you need direction for that maybe you need to look into another career. [To PHONE}: Hey Marcus.
FordSeeuws edited an action in "Behind The Curtain" on 12/16/2011 [view]
Doc stares at her blankly. He is about to answer it, but pauses momentarily.
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