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INT. Sc. 4 - 2017, present day.
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Older Jayne is back in the auditorium, this time sitting in the audience.
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INT. International student Thing fIRST DRAFT - Sc. 1
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Older Jayne is back in the auditorium, this time sitting in the audience.
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INT. Sc. 4 - 2017, present day.
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JAYNE
(too relieved to be awkward)
Thank you for that, I honestly don't know what I would have done if she wanted to eat lunch together.
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Katie's greeting whisks Jayne out of the room and away from Quincy, who stands there seething for a few seconds before composing herself. The two walk down the hall together, arms threaded for a few seconds, before going down a staircase and separating.
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She looks around the room with an expectant smile. It is dead silent.
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QUINCY
Oh. I see.
(she is clearly unimpressed but tries to cover it up)
How fun! Lucky you not having to move around too much--or too far!
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JAYNE
(genuinely impressed)
Oh, wow. That's really cool. I, um, was in Hong Kong for a couple years and Beijing before that. But I was born in Malaysia.
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Beat. It's silent for a second as neither knows what to say.
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Mrs. EGGLESTON
(trying to regain composure, a little flustered)
Thank you, Bryce, for that, ahm, interesting explanation. Let's get started!
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Mrs. EGGLESTON
(trying to regain composure)
O...kay then. Great. Let's get started.
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BRYCe
(Talking over her)
--you're gonna look in a box and see stuff like "has three siblings" or "plays the violin" or "dated your sister's super hot friend Payton over the summer"--
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Bryce jumps up on a table and uses it as a podium.
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MRs. EGGLESTON
Welcome, guys, to new student orientation! My name is Mrs. Eggleston and I'm your guidance counselor. I know moving is scary but I'm here to help you guys out. Think of me as a friend, okay?
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JAYNE V.O. (CONT'D)
I always told myself that when I left China was when I would start getting real opportunities. I didn't realize back then that when you made your own world everything was at your fingertips.
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JAYNE V.O.
I can buy clothes at Madewell before the sale section goes on sale. I can buy artisanal olive oils just so that I can put dried flowers in the empty bottle afterwards. I live with one roommate, not five, in a place with both an elevator and a laundry room. In the building.
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JAYNE V.O. (CONT'D) (CON
But then I thought fuck that shit, man. Six months into eating beans for every meal and a job at the New York Times falls into my lap. Gotta love family connections. Low level but with the promise of promotions to come. It's still creative, I told myself.
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Jayne V.O. (CONT'D) (CON
I wanted to be an actress. But not just regional theatre in Milwaukee or something. I wanted to make it big, do those parts that turned the stage into a mirror and let me hold two thousand beating hearts in the palm of my hand.
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INT. Abroad And Afraid fIRST DRAFT - Sc. 1
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JAYNE
I...um...I do like to bake, yeah. And hi, I'm Jayne.
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