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GinoSandoval edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013. GinoSandoval made 32 other changes.
GinoSandoval edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
(nods)
your right, your right. You know when i was your age i made every mistake a boy could make I meddled around with every women and man i could get my hand on.. i was in a real dark place and all signs lead the wrong way,but then one day there he was on tv my hero magic johnson. Do you have a hero brad?
( before he can answer)
5 x world champion telling the world that he fought and he fought and won the biggest challenge of them all. So you know what i say to myself?
(before brad can answer again)
If he can do it i can do it, so i fought and fought and im still fighting today
( brad uncomfortable scoots over)
so brad what im saying is you got what it takes to beat those french putans..
GinoSandoval edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
(nods)
your right, your right. You know when i was your age i made every mistake a boy could make I meddled around with every women and man i could get my hand on.. i was in a real dark place and all signs lead the wrong way,but then one day there was on tv magic johnson 5 x world champion telling the world that he fought and he fought and won the biggest challenge of them all. So you know what i say to myself? If he can do it i can do it, so i fought and fought and im still fighting today
( brad uncomfortable scoots over)
so brad what im saying is you got what it takes to beat those french putans..
GinoSandoval edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
(nods)
your right, your right. You know when i was your age i made every mistake a boy could make i meddled around with every women and man i could get my hand on.. i was in a real dark place and all signs lead the wrong way,but then one day there was on tv magic johnson 5 x world champion telling the world that he fought and he fought and won the biggest challenge of them all. So you know what i say to myself? If he can do it i can do it, so i fought and fought and im still fighting today
( brad uncomfortable scoots over)
so brad what im saying is you got what it takes to beat those french putans..
GinoSandoval edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
Snap out of it you big baby. You remember two years ago when i found at the disco skating rink. I looked into your eyes from across the rink and i saw a heart of a cahmpion, i knew you would bring home the gold one day. And now that day has come Brad!
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Coach:
(they stare at each other for a few moments)
Use your balls to land that split , just like i used my balls.
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Intercom:
Calling Brad Landers to the skating rink..
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Coach:
Shhhh
(covers brads mouth with his index finger)
listen when you "woke up this morning did you say to yourself today im gonna talk or today im gonna skate"?
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Brad:
And whats that coach?
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Coach:
(nods)
your right, your right. You know when i was your age i made every mistake a boy could i meddled around with every women and man i could get my hand on.. i was in a real dark place and all signs lead the wrong way,but then one day there was on tv magic johnson 5 x world champion telling the world that he fought and he fought and won the biggest challenge of them all. So you know what i say to myself? If he can do it i can do it, so i fought and fought and im still fighting today
( brad uncomfortable scoots over)
so brad what im saying is you got what it takes to beat those french putans..
GinoSandoval added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
(nods)
your right, your right. You know when i was your age i made every mistake a boy could i meddled around with every women and man i could get my hand on.. i was in a real dark place and all signs lead the wrong way,
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Brad:
(confused)
but coach... there the ones who pick the winner.
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Coach:
No ... not with the heat that you just had but forget about the judges who needs em
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Coach:
No ... not with the heat that you just had
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Brad:
(sniffles)
oh you really think i have a chance coach.
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Brad:
(sniffles)
oh you really think so coach even though t
GinoSandoval added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/26/2013 [view]
Coach:
Snap out of it you big baby. You remember two years ago when i found at the disco skating rink. I looked into your from across the rink and i saw a heart of a cahmpion, i knew you would bring home the gold one day. And now that day has come Brad!
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Coach slaps him a few times
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Brad:
(feeling self conscious about his body)
I know, i know..
(burys face in hands)
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Coach:
so what you a little huskier on the tights than those two
(rubbing legs still)
maybe you could have cut back on the kfc last week but whats done is done.
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Steven goes to his corner
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Brad:
Shut up steve! this nothing to do with you! Go to your corner.
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From the corner of the room
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Brad:
Shut up steve! this nothing to do with you! Go to your corner
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Steven:
Brad i told you if you let me skate with you today we might have a better shot at beating....
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Brad:
There just better than me i cant land my splits like those to french lovers Roman & Estevan.
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Coach:
What do you mean? Your a champ kid remember that?
(starts to rub his leg)
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Coach:
What do you mean?
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Brad:
I cant do it coach!
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Brad a finger skater enters the locker after having a terrible heat, he throws a fit for having done so bad.
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INT. Int: Inside of a locker room
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