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Alex_cisneros edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013. Alex_cisneros made 23 other changes.
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INT. INT. (DIFFERENT BAR) - 6PM
Alex_cisneros edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
INT. EXT. (dIFFERENT BAR) - 6PM
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INT. INT. (DIFFERENT) BAR
Alex_cisneros added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
HENRY
Yeah no problem.
Alex_cisneros added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
ALICE
And today.
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Henry nods.
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ALICE
Thank you for yesterday.
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Henry turns around.
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ALICE
Hey!
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Henry heads for the door.
Alex_cisneros edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
ALICE
I know friends who have jobs.
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LUKE
Have you ever worked in a bar before? Or even anywhere a day of your life?
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ALICE
My name is Alice and I don't want a job here, I need one.
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HENRY
Alice, this is my friend Luke. Luke, Alice here wants to apply a job.
Alex_cisneros edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
She stares at him with eyes of plead. Breaking the silence, Luke Bow, 25, comes in the door; he flips the "Closed" sign to "Open." His eyes narrow at the sight of Alice; he goes behind the counter and puts on his name tag.
Alex_cisneros added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
HENRY
Well I've gotta get back to the shop.
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Luke leaves the room. Alice sighs, she smiles at Henry.
Alex_cisneros edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
ALICE
No wait! Please, i'm a fast learner and I catch on things quickly and i'm social person too! I really need this job... I have nothing anymore.
Alex_cisneros added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
LUKE
Just get to work before people come.
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Luke remains still and clueless. He pats Alice's back, then removes her hands around his neck.
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Alice glows with happiness. She runs over the counter and rushes into Luke.
Alex_cisneros added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/18/2013 [view]
ALICE
Oh thank you so so much! You won't regret it!
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Alice glows with happiness. She runs over the counter and rushes to Luke, hugging him.
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