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Scene 1

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empty house

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shots of the house empty on an empty street being contrasted to the upbeat reggae being played (six and seven books of moses by Toots and the Maytals)

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Scene 2 Last edited by misty, on 01/31/2010. 0 comments. More scene info.

Scene 2

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Police's investigation room

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The same young man is now in an investigation chamber. The detectives are there asking him questions. The young man is looking down, twitching his fingers while the detective is pacing around him.

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Detective #1

Why though?

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Young man

Why what?

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Detective #1

Why did you kill her?

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Young man

What do you mean?

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The detective stops and looks at the young man with a taken aback face. the young mans face is still down.

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Detective #1

You know exactly what I mean. Why did you get the damn gun and shoot the damn girl?

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The young man looks stops twitching his fingers. his head still down.

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Young man

I was fifteen when she told me i couldn't get a job better than my dads.

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Detective #1

The woman?

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The young man looks up for a moment.

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Young man

No, my mother.

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The detective starts pacing again. the man puts his head back to the ground.

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Detective #1

Why would she say that?

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Young man

I had quit school.

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The detective freezes and looks at the man.

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Detective #1

So how did you get a job as a lawyer?

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The young man stops twitching his fingers, leans back and smiles.

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Young man

It wasn't to hard to pass the bar. That summer I left to a small town in california. I got my first job there, and my first real life.

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Detective #1

Did your family go with you?

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Young man

No, just me.

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Detective #1

But then how-

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The young man cuts him off

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Young man

I lied. I was there John Reed. No one thought any of it.

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Flashback

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Small town on the california SEASIDE five years years before

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