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Cleopatra is the future Queen of Egypt.
She is in love with her new servant Re unknowing that her lover was the Sun God Ra.
Her love threatens her wanting to take the crown, her nursemaid, Riza, is her only voice of reason in her insecurity.
Cleopatra is to meet Re in the abandoned catacombs deep beneath the castle.
Her emotions were beaming in her smile and quickened her steps.
Cleopatra's younger half brother Ptolemy intercepts her on her way there.
He threatens her with the knowledge of her affair with a servant when she is to be married to him.
She is pressured to make a choice right there in front of him.
Remembering the advice her chambermaid once gave her of a Queen needing to be confident with the decisions she makes, she faces down her brother.
After asserting her position she leaves to find Re.
Upon finding him she holds him in an embrace and he reveals his identity, her suspicion of his true form confirmed.

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cleopatra
(small smile)
He is not of royal blood but always have a strong demeanor of someone with high stature. If the Sun God was human, Re would be him, for he resembles him almost exactly. He even bears a birthmark of the sun upon his right forearm. It is unfair though that I must marry one that is such a child!
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Ptolemy
Oh, but sweet Cleo, thou has forgotten so easily. I hold leverage of great magnitude. If the Pharaoh knew the truth of thine affair he'd be furious and will sentence the poor boy to death at the very least, if he is merciful.
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Ptolemy (CONT'D)
I would listen to what I have to say Cleo. Ye wouldn't wish for Pharaoh to suddenly be told the truth of thine affair would ye?
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Riza
Be swift and careful princess.
(beat)
One question I must ask you before you go; how much do you know about this young Re?
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Riza
A Queen is confident in the decisions she makes. You'll make the choice right for you and Egypt.
 

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