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Jackalai added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/25/2011. Jackalai made 11 other changes. more
Krissy
Oh Mark doesn't mind, - he's the driver. He gets an omlette every morning and that keeps him happy.
Jackalai added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/25/2011. Jackalai made 10 other changes. more
Ben
Hi. I'm Ben.
Jackalai edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/25/2011. Jackalai made 3 other changes. more
As Ben walks back through the train, amongst all the strange passengers he notices a diamond in the rough - an attractive girl his own age named ALLIE. Ben notices that she is fully engrossed in reading a Stephanie Meyers book. The seat next to her is open, but Ben is afraid to take it and he continues to the back of the train.
Jackalai edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/24/2011. Jackalai made 29 other changes. more
Ben stands in the entryway of the train. He takes a moment to look around before moving further. Ben sees the an assortment of passengers who are at once very strange, but also very common for a commuter train. All eyes are on him, and he feels like an intruder in some place that he does not belong.
 

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