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speech (cont.) Last edited by Nikk21, on 11/10/2009. 0 comments. More scene info.

montage:shows vidio clips on a T.v. screen of country represenitives signing/surrendering to u.s (t.v. has fuzzy reseption)

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ALLEN

soon afterward the U.S. changed its name to The united American Nations to better aconandate its status and for the first time the plan acutully worked till they reilised that they couldent actully keep tabs on everybody so they hired the best men they could to make sure that there was alwasy enough trouble going on so the GOV. presens was alwase nessasary by causing murders, stealing, white colar crime and other jobs till we started getting too good.(continuous1)

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MONTAGE:show the pepole doing there job's causing havoc and trouble as directed useally in dressed up manner

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ALLEN (CONT'D)

we could tell you the exact min. and second some one would leave this world,get robed or injured it was fuun to walk away and count the seconds till it happened.till we where fired. i bring you to present day U.A.N. where the pepole are lazy and the dollor means everything some of us unemployed had trouble keeping busy.

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int.resteruant building-3:35pm

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Allen is shown sitting in cafe/bar/resterant

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INSERT:Allens watch showing the time

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CUT TO: profile view of allen he turns his head to face the T.V. in the corner. some news is playing nothing important.His head turns back down to face a planner thats on the table(happy cheesy music in the background) bartender/cafe/restraunt manager comes to the table.

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manager

so what'cha want

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Allen keeps head down as if he didnt hear starts to doodle

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manager (CONT'D)

i said What Do you Wa.....

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Allen interrupting

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ALLEN

the world turns very slowly.and for some it just...needs to stop

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manager

Oh its you.come on the junks in the back with your stupid records.

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Allen stands pays for his drink and scritches an small itch.then follows the manager to a back room.inside the room there is a door located directly in the center of the room they go through this also. after they go down a flight of stairsthey come to what appears to be a basement.

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junk and tech is strewn thruout the room.

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manager (CONT'D)

sorry for the mess. some guy came down here and went crazy,saying i was a killer.i dont quite remember what happened eather he drank from the wrong bottle or i shot him.. ah ether way who cares

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Allen pauses looking slightly distreesed. the itch has increased

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manager

you alright? you seem kind of...buggy

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allen

Fine.

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Allen struggles to keep his arm fromm shaking.

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ALLEN (CONT'D)

(sence of urgency) can we hurry i have stuff to do. stuff to do.

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manager turns explains the gear (can come up with this later)and throws it to Allen.Allen catches it.

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manager

now you be carfull with that ya hear. dont want ya hurting anybody.

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ALLEN

yeah sure..sure

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Allens mind starts to play tricks on him arm shakes more now and he starts to ramble nosence

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ALLEN (CONT'D)

only to fight the establishment you rember that place... tragic best food in town never tasted good though and my clothes never got cleaned.... at least i paid my taxes when i was born.

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Allen turns to leave and makes his way to the stairs as he does he trips he hits the floor with a THUD and now is shaking violently.Allen strugless for controll of his body starting to get up.then falls back down.from Allens POV we see the room turn round and round till the manager comes into screen focus.we can make out that he is carrying a needle.he walks up to Allen and then

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