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Nikk21 edited dialogue in "speech (cont.)" on 11/10/2009. Nikk21 made 60 other changes.
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mitchel
aahhh shut it. your one to talk you an't even walk right.
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man #1
man be quite before i shoot your mom
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mitchel
aahhh shut it. your one to talk you an't even walk right.
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man #1
well i hope so.hey you see mitchel fall down last week man.. classic.
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ALLEN
I was busy.....working. on stuff
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man #1
Allen your late i thought you said you be back in 5 not five days
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Allen enters building inside is dimly lit full of pepole and aqantites
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INT. int.unidentifyed building-1:35pm
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ALLEN (CONT'D)
we could tell you the exact min. and second some one would leave this world,get robed or injured it was fuun to walk away and count the seconds till it happened.till we where fired. i bring you to present day U.A.N. where the pepole are lazy and the dollor means everything some of us had trouble keeping busy.
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ALLEN (CONT'D)
we could tell you the exact min. and second some one would leave this world,get robed or injured it was fuun to walk away and count the seconds till it happened.till we where fired. i bring you to present day U.A.N. where the pepole are lazy and the dollor means everything some of us had trouble keeping adjusting and ste up our own rebellion nation just for fun.
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ALLEN
we could tell you the exact min. and second some one would leave this world,get robed or injured it was fuun to walk away and count the seconds till it happened.
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MONTAGE:show the pepole doing there job's causing havoc and trouble as directed useally in dressed up manner
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ALLEN
soon afterward the U.S. changed its name to The united American Nations to better aconandate its status and for the first time the plan acutully worked till they reilised that they couldent actully keep tabs on everybody so they hired the best men they could to make sure that there was alwasy enough trouble going on so the GOV. presens was alwase nessasary by causing murders, stealing, white colar crime and other jobs till we started getting too good.
(continuous1)
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MONTAGE:
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ALLEN
soon afterward the U.S. changed its name to The united American Nations to better aconandate its status and for the first time the plan acutully worked till they reilised that they couldent actully keep tabs on everybody so they hired the best men they could to make sure that there was alwasy enough trouble going on so the GOV. presens was alwase nessasary by causing murders, stealing, white colar crime and other jobs till we started getting too good.
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INT. montage:shows vidio clips on a T.v. screen of country represenitives signing/surrendering to u.s (t.v. has fuzzy reseption)
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INT. montage
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ALLEN
after four years no one believed in it anymore but the GOV. kept it. easy way to rid the U.S. of felons. till some thing happenend iraq became the 51st state of the U.S. it was easy from there. one after another countrys fell to this new goverement "One free nation on a world wide scale for the betterment empowerment and advancement of mankind"thats how they got us with the we are one speech.
(continuous1)
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MONTAGE: "mission men" getting shot at abused proclaiming there ideals mixed in with clips of presadental speaches.(continuous2)
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ALLEN
"by there sins ye shall know them.", hmph funny how that is.... Twenty years ago our "beloved" united stated a group called the Collective Peace Directive a group whos sole purpose was to convert the world to an american way of living.made up of mostly lower class citizns and convicted felons this plan was not even the slightest thought sucessfull.but enough promises for "change" fixed that real quick.at first it went just as it was thought. the Mission men, as they where called, where dispised and oposed by the other countreys. and they hated the U.S. for im posing there ideals on them.
(continuous1)
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MONTAGE: "mission men" getting shot at abused proclaiming there ideals
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ALLEN
"by there sins ye shall know them.", hmph funny how that is.... Twenty years ago our "beloved" united stated a group called the Collective Peace Directive a group whos sole purpose was to convert the world to an american way of living.made up of mostly lower class citizns and convicted felons this plan was not even the slightest thought sucessfull.but enough promises for "change" fixed that real quick.at first it went just as it was thought. the Mission men, as they where called, where dispised and oposed by the other countreys. and they hated the U.S. for im posing there ideals on them.
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ALLEN
"by there sins ye shall know them"
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Allen checks his watch once more as his arm falls back to his side(blackout)car EXPLODES a watches TICKING slows to a stop. after a brief pause Allen begins to SPEAK/NARRATE.
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man in car
HELP! PLEASE !!! HHHEEELLLP!
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allen continues to check his watch and walkes down the drive way to the accedent.A man in the car calls for help.Allen faces the man gives a salute to the man turns and walks away.man in car calls out.
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Allen checks his watch agin, as this happens a car accedent occurs off screen.
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sun casts a yellow gold over whole set give the feeling of a plesent day ( hopefully a blue sky )
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Allen squints as the afternoon sunlight strikes him in the eyes Allen places sunglaces on.
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INT. ext.inner city house-same
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the woman rambles on as Allen continues to walk out the door music ends as Allen SLAMS the door.
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man walks down hallway to the door the house its self is dark dreay and gloomy. the man is about to leave when a womens voice CALLS from off screen
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the woman rambles on as Allen continues to walk out the door music ends as Allen SLAMS the door
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woman
Allen!...Allen, when are you going to be back? if your out to long theyll come looking for you.And im not...
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man walks down hallway to the door and is about to leave when a womens voice CALLS from off screen
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INT. int. inner city home-hallway/doorway-continuous
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man walks to the bathroom. you hear the toliet FLUSH as man closes medicien cabnet .mirror is broken. only showing nose down of the man.after a few seconds man turns abrupt right and leaves
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man is seen sleeping on the one bed as he wakes up. sits uprightly in bed.the dim light shadows the man facial features leaving his identiy a mystery.
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man walks to the bathroom. you hear the toliet FLUSH as man closes medicien cabnet .mirror is broken. only showing nose down of the man.
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(close up shot) a record spins quietly as the MUSIC PLAYS in the quiet room in habited by one man. the room is cluttered with clothes magazines and random items. afternoon light trickles through the blinds.room appeares dim and stuffy.
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man walks to the bathroom. you hear the toliet FLUSH as man closes medicien cabnet .mirror is broken only showing nose down of the man.
Nikk21 added an action in "int. inner city house-bed room - early afternoon" on 11/10/2009 [view]
man walks to the bathroom. you hear the toliet FLUSH as man closes medicien cabnet .mirror is broken only showing nose down of the man
Nikk21 edited an action in "int. inner city house-bed room - early afternoon" on 11/10/2009 [view]
man walks to the bathroom. you hear the toliet FLUSH as man closes medicien cabnet .mirror is broken only showing nose down of the man
Nikk21 edited an action in "int. inner city house-bed room - early afternoon" on 11/10/2009 [view]
man is seen sleeping on the one bed as he wakes up. sits uprightly in bed.
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man walks to the bathroom
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as MUSIC PLAYS man gets dressed[already has jeans and t-shirt on]
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man pickes up needle music stops and switches the record places needle back on and MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY.
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