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London1999 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. London1999 made 47 other changes.
London1999 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
The only thing she is going to kill in the morning is her hunger.
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INT. Int. - In the living room - around dawn
London1999 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Okay, Okay.
London1999 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
For real dad, I'll clean it in the morning.
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Larry
When I wake up in the morning this couch and you better be clean
London1999 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
The only thing she is going to kill in the morning is her hunger
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Larry takes his son on a fishing trip for doing a good job cleaning.
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The scene slowly fades away.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Sounds good to me.
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They both laugh and cast there line out.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
This is how I will repay you from now on.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Anytime.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Wow! I'm amazed of how good you did, thank you son.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I told you I would clean before she gets up, and I also cleaned the rest of the house, your welcome.
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Larry hurries and rush to the living room, surprised in what he sees.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
For real dad, I'll clean it in the morning
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
For real Larry, get up and clean this couch.
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They both start silently laughing but Larry was still getting irritated by his son's laziness.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
larry
No you will do it now!
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I will early before she gets up in the morning.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
She wont if you et your ass up and clean it.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Well what if she don't?
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Yea, me too, your mom will kill us both if she wakes up and sees that couch.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I'm sorry, I told you I'm really tired
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Your killing me son.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Yea, I got up.. Then I fell asleep.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
John get up! What did I just say to you?
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As Larry goes to take a shower, John falls back asleep.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Okay.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
When I get out the shower this couch and you better be cleaned.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I'm tired of being yelled at while i'm trying to sleep.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
I'm tired of your smart ass mouth!
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I am listening to you but i'll listen to you when I wake up in the morning
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Don't be such a smart ass, listen to what your father tells you.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Sure did sir.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Did you just yell at me?
London1999 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry, surprised of the way his son is acting towards him
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I told you I'll do it in the morning!
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
No you will do it now! get up and get to work.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
I'll clean it in the morning, I'm too tired.
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
I don't care what you've done! Get up and change and clean this couch now!
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Oh... about that, we just got done mu..
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
Look at you! Sleeping on the couch with muddy clothes on
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
John
Wha.. what did I do?
London1999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Larry
John get up now!
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As Larry enters the house after a long day at work, he walks in to see his son laying on the couch with muddy clothes on.
London1999 added a slugline in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
INT. Int. - In the living room - around dusk
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