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920649 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. 920649 made 96 other changes.
920649 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
bill
oh, im so sorry.
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John
Nothing. It's okay we have 30 minutes left. We are above the ocean right now.
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JOHN read a manual once about how flight attendants were not supposed to tell the passengers if anything was seriously wrong, to reduce panic. JOHN knew that the woman was lying to him, so he hugged REAGEN a little closer.
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john (CONT'D)
Does anyone have anything to calm her down?
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John
Alright, let's get something to eat.
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At 9:00, the rain started, and REAGAN woke up.
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John (slowly waking up)
Alright I'm up, don't worry It's gonna be fine we will be there soon. Go back to sleep I'm right here.
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At 9:00, the rain started, and REAGAN woke up
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After getting into the plane, JOHN and REAGAN took their seats in first class and got everything they wanted out of their carry-on bags and cuddled up in their seat.
920649 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
reagen
Me either. I bet It's beautiful... I've never been on a plane before, I'm nervous.
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reagen
Me either. I bet It's beautiful... I've never been on a plane beforeI'm nervous about this plane ride though...I've never been on a plane before.
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john
Me too. I can't wait to see what our beach house looks like!
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reagen
I'm so hungry, but super excited!
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John
A honeymoon near Hawaii.
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Passenger
My name is Bill, nice to meet you guys...Where were y'all going?
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John
I'm not sure...
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reagen
What happened?
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reagen
I'm okay. My head hurts and so does my arm but they aren't broken or bleeding I think.
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john
Are you okay? Are you hurt anywhere?
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Someone grabbed JOHN and pulled them both on a lifeboat. The water was freezing so they all huddled together. They could barely see a thing it was so dark.
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Everything was black and the plane hit the water. JOHN grabbed REAGEN and swam up. When they broke the surface of the water they swam after from the plane so they wouldn't go down with it. It didn't sink right away so people grabbed life boats.
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reagen
I love you too.
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john
I love you.
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JOHN
It's okay dont worry--
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reagen
I love you too
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john
I love you
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Before he could finish his sentence the plane shook really bad and all the lights went out. People got up running and screaming, JOHN and REAGEN just stayed in their seats and held each other.
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She looked around the plane to see if she could get a flight attendant but when she turned around all she saw was the frightened faces of other passengers. She turned around and her face was pale.
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reagen
I felt a bump I want to know what it is.
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John
Nothing It's okay we have 30 minutes left. We are above the ocean right now.
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reagen
What was that?
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There was a big bump. It felt like they had hit something but they were in the air, what could it be? REAGEN woke up.
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john
Alright let me know if anything changes.
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flight attendant
Oh nothing to worry about the weather indicators have just picked up a small storm, nothing serious.
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john
Hey whats going on?
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Then he heard a strange beeping sound. The flight attendant's were a little more jumpy after talking to a man in the cockpit. They were acting like they were scared and JOHN knew there had to be something wrong.
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reagen
Alright. I'll take it.
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flight attendant
Yeah, she should be ready to wake up in about 45 minutes, I'ts not very strong.
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john
We get off in about an hour. Will she be up by then?
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flight attendant
I have something that can out her to sleep. Are you okay with that?
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john (CONT'D)
Does anybody have anything that could calm her down?
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They stayed up and ate a small snack and the rain had only gotten worse. It was lightening and thundering and REAGEN was only getting more scared.
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Reagen
JOHN I'm really scared. I can't sleep.
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John
Alright lets get something to eat.
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John (slowly waking up)
Alright I'm up, don't worry It's gonna be fine we will be there in about two hours. Go back to sleep i'm right here.
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reagen
Hey JOHN, wake up I'm scared. It's raining.
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It was about 9:00P.M. when the rain started and REAGAN woke up.
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john
I will.
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reagen
Alright, tell me when we are almost there.
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john
It's okay just go to sleep. We will be there before you know it.
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