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920649 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. 920649 made 59 other changes.
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Six months later they were on a boat to go to a new honey moon destination when halfway through their trip the big boat hit a rock and started to sink...
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Six months later they were on a boat to go to a new honey moon destination when halfway through their trip the big boat hit a rock and started to sink...to be continued...
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john
It's okay we are safe now.
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reagen
Me too...I just can't stop thinking about SAMMY and BILL, they saved us then tried to kill us.
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john
I'm glad we are both okay.
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They both looked up to see a plane coming there way. They screamed and yelled and when it landed the people knew exactly who they were and told them that everyone on the plane survived except for three couples. The third couple were floating in the water near the island because they tried to swim away and they drowned. It was SAMMY and BILL. REAGAN began to cry and JOHN held her. The plane took them back to their city and they went to the hospital.
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reagan
No...it sounds like an airplane.
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john
Hear what? SAMMY and BILL?!
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reagen
Do you hear that?
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SAMMY ran at them with her knife and REAGEN and JOHN ran to the forest. They hid there all night and when the sun came up they walked back out to the beach. BILL and SAMMY were no where to be found. JOHN made a big fire to attract airplanes and they waited all day with their backs to the ocean.
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Bill
So..you noticed, you're smarter than you look JOHN. We have to kill you because fish can't keep us alive forever and there's no telling when we will be rescued so we have to eat you two, I'm sorry.
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SAMMY ran at them with her knife and REAGEN and JOHN ran to the forest. They hid there all night and when the sun came up they
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Bill
So..you noticed, you're smarter than you look JOHN. We have to kill you because fish can't keep us alive forever so we have to eat you two, I'm sorry.
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JOHN (yelling)
Why are you trying to kill us!?
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reagan
Why would they do this? That's why they haven't been speaking to us!
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JOHN
SAMMY put poisonous plants in it. I remember them teaching us about this plant in boy scouts.
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reagan
why not?
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JOHN (whispering to REAG
Don't eat the fish.
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They all survived on the island for a few days, it had been 5 days since the crash but BILL and SAMMY were acting strange. They weren't talking to anyone but each other and JOHN was getting suspicious. One night when BILL was cooking dinner which was fish over a fire JOHN saw SAMMY put something in only 2 of the fish, which went to JOHN and REAGAN.
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Then JOHN heard a strange beeping sound. The flight attendants were a little more jumpy after talking to a man in the cockpit, who looked like the pilot. They were acting like they were scared and JOHN knew there had to be something wrong.
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After REAGEN fell asleep, JOHN stayed up and watched over her just to make sure she was okay.
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john
Yeah that's great, I know a little about plants myself from being a boy scout and leading them when I was younger.
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bill
We both study wildlife and we also study plant abilities, so we know what kind we can eat, what kind heal and what kind will kill you if you eat them.
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reagen
That's amazing! I'm glad you guys saved us!
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bill
We both study wildlife and plants abilities so we know what kind we can eat and what kind heal and what kind will kill you if you eat them.
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John
Who are you people? How do yo know so much about plants?
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Bill
Hold that thought! I see some aloe plants for our sunburns.
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Sammy
LOOK! There are coconuts! We can use them to help our sunburns and we can even drink and eat them!
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They all ran off of the boat and into the shade of some tall trees, they were all badly sunburned and SAMMY saw some coconuts up in one of the trees.
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john
We will be fine I promise. Let's go, the plane will be boarding soon.
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john
It's okay, I've been in tons of planes and we have a highly recommended pilot and a very good plane so nothing should go wrong.
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INT. ext. - the island - dawn
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They woke everybody up and showed them. They were heading straight for it. They waited until they hit the shore and all jumped out just as the sun came up.
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john
It's an island!!
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reagen
In the distance the moon stops hitting the water and It's all black.
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john
What?
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reagen
Do you see that?
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She was looking at the moon when for some reason the reflection of it stopped hitting the water and shining in the distance..she blinked a few times and stood up and pulled JOHN up with her.
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reagen
It's not your fault this happened. I just can't wait to get back home and be safe with you.
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john
I'm sorry this happened, I should've got boat tickets or something. I promise as soon as we get back we will plan a new honeymoon.
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They were floating around when nightfall came, they had all eaten and were asleep except for JOHN and REAGAN, they were cuddled up in a corner looking out at the ocean.
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They were floating around when nightfall came, they had all eaten and were asleep except for JOHN and REAGAN, they were cuddled up in a corner.
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john
Yes look for islands too, I don't know how much longer I can stay on water.
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reagan
what about islands? We could stay on one and not get sunburns, I already started to get one.
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bill
I have been but so far nothing but oceans.
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john
Everyone keep your eyes out for boats and planes alright?
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They all pitched in and helped each other and by that night they all had food but no water because it hadn't rained that day, but while they were sleeping they collected just enough water to go around.
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bill
That's a good idea I'll help.
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They all pitched in and helped each other and by that night they all had food but no water because it hadn't rained that day, but while they were sleeping they collected just enough water to go around
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sammy
Yeah and we can cut the fish with my pocket knife.
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