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05301998 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. 05301998 made 54 other changes.
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dan
good morning honey.
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INT. int. 7:00 am
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she just wanted to die happy so she had asked her daughter a couple day before retirement to come down and live with her not telling dan anything.
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the following months he asks for forgiveness and cries and always visits her grave.
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dan
oh my god i didn't know.
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The daughter
you did not know that's why i came here to live a while
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DAn
what?
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the daughter
she is dead we knew this was coming she has cancer.
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DAN shakes her she does not awake he calls his daughter they call 911.
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dan
good morning honey.
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the following months they all paint together and fix the house and acts as if nothing has happened and laugh and paint and it seems just like there has been nothing wrong in the world between them.
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Teresa
sure sweetie what ever you need
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Dan
okay sure.
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the daughter
I' am going to need to stay there a couple months.
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their daughter sits down
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their daughter sits down and says she is going to need to stay there a couple months.
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their is a fresh salad on the table and hamburgers.
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their daughter arrives and goes inside greeted by her parents.
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dan
okay.
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Teresa
you will clean this up and get dressed up and not mention a word of this to our daughter.
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The phone rings it's their daughter and she is coming to town they act fine over the phone like nothing has happened.
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Teresa slings paint everywhere we are getting a divorce and i am taking everything.
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dan
yes i am sorry i think i am in love with her.
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Teresa
you just said Janet the women you use to work with.
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dan
no one
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Teresa
you miss who?
05301998 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
dan
I miss Janet.
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Teresa
I miss work
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Dan
I think you are right.
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teresa
I guess we have only focused on work and that's it we don't even know each other after we raised the kids.
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dan
sorry.
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teresa
purple DAN purple.
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dan
pink.
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Teresa
whats my favorite color?
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Dan
yes.
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teresa
do you know anything about me after 50 years.
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Dan
oh' my i didn't know that either.
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Teresa
I don't drink at all i don't like it.
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Dan
I didn't know that. would you like some red wine or white wine?
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Teresa
all of that is grose i am
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Teresa
all of that is gorse i am a vegaitarion
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Dan
oh okay so you want some chines or grilled chicken or hamburgers or what.
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Teresa
me too and I don't like spaghetti.
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DAN
what are we going to have for dinner would you like some spaghetti I use to grab some food on the way back from work.
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they start painting together.
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TERESA just stands their till she can get a paint brush and paint.
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Dan gets the drill and paint and wood out and decides to put hardwood floors down to.
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Teresa
lets do it.
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Dan
I guess we could fix the house up I have paint and wood and everything in our spare room.
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Teresa
yea I know me too.
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