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emitz12 added a new scene titled "THE JOURNEY BEGINS" a year ago
emitz12 added an action in "BECOMING A MAN" a year ago [view]
{SCENE END}
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aRES
THIS WHOLE THING STILL CREEPS ME OUT ZEUS
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zEUS
OUR BOY IS JUST GROWING UP SO FAST IS HE NOT?
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{ATHELETIS WALKS OUT THE DOOR}
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ATHELETIS
WELL I GUESS I SHOULD BEGIN MY JOURNEY TO FIND A CITY.
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aRES
FINALLY YOU DECIDE THE SMALL STUFF LIKE HOW YOU WANT TO BE WORSHIPED AND THIGS LIKE THAT
emitz12 added dialogue in "BECOMING A MAN" a year ago [view]
aRES
WELL SON YOU FIND YOURSELF A CITY AND MAKE YOURSELF THEIR CHEIF GOD. THEN YOU PICK YOURSELF OUT A GODDESS WOMAN AND MAKE HER YOURS.
emitz12 added dialogue in "BECOMING A MAN" a year ago [view]
ATHELETIS
WHAT AM I SUPPOSE TO DO HERE IN A YEAR WHEN I BECOME A SENIOR GOD?
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aRES
YES SON, WHAT CAN I DO FOR YOU?
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ARES
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(ATHLETIS WALKS IN}
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{SCENE CUTS TO ZEUS AND ARES SITTING AT TWO CHAIRS}
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zEUS & ARES
WHAT SON?
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ZEUS & ARES
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ATHLETIS
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NARRATOR
LEGEND HAS IT THAT THE FIRST WORDS THAT ATHELTIS SPOKE WERE FOOTBALL, THAN WAR. BY AGE 15 HE WAS THE BEST ATHLETE TO EVER WALK AMONG BOTH THE GODS AND MORTALS.
emitz12 added an action in "BECOMING A MAN" a year ago [view]
{SCENE OPENS WITH ATHLETIS PLAYING A MULTIDE OF SPORTS}
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INT. {START SCENE} —
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emitz12 added a new scene titled "BECOMING A MAN" a year ago
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zEUS
YEAH, I MEANT TO DO THAT. I NEVER CLAIMED TO BE HUMBLE.
emitz12 added dialogue in "THE BEGINNING" a year ago [view]
aRES
DANG!! HE LOOKS IDENTICAL TO YOU ZEUS!!
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{THE SCREEN COMES BACK AND WE SEE ZEUS AND ARES ENTER AT THE SAME TIME, THE ZEUS ENTERS BEHIND THEM}
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{ARES AND ZEUS EXIT THE ROOM AND THE SCREEN GOES BLACK}
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aRES
WHATEVER. LET US JUST GET THIS DONE WITH OK.....IT IS REALLY WEIRD
emitz12 added dialogue in "THE BEGINNING" a year ago [view]
zEUS
YEAH AND THEN WHAT? THROW DISCUS AT OUR ENEMIES. NO. I LIKE THE NAME, IT IS MANLY, BUT WE.... THAT IS IT, GOD OF ALL THINGS MANLY
emitz12 added dialogue in "THE BEGINNING" a year ago [view]
aRES
WE SHALL NAME HIM ATHLETIS. HE WILL BE THE GOD OF ALL MANLY AND TESTOSTERONE FILLED THINGS!!
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zEUS
YEAH, SO LOOK WHAT ARE WE GONNA NAME HIM AND WHAT IS HE GONNA BE?
emitz12 added dialogue in "THE BEGINNING" a year ago [view]
aRES
OH. RIGHT THAT KIND OF "MAGIC"
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zEUS
UM, I DID. GO WHERE NO ONE CAN SEE AND USE OUR POWERS AS GODS TO JUSY MOLD ANOTHYER ONE OF US.
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aRES
OH MY GOD! I THOUGHT YOU SAID NOTHING WERID OR PERSONAL.
emitz12 added dialogue in "THE BEGINNING" a year ago [view]
zEUS
WELL ITS SIMPLE IS IT NOT? WE GO INTO A BACK ROOM AND WORK SOME MAGIC.
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aRES
OK WELL LOOK, NONE OF THE OTHER GUYS HAVE EVER HAD THIS IDEA. IT HAS NEVER HAPPENED, HOW IS THIS EVEN SUPPOSE TO WORK?
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zEUS
LOOK ARES, IT IS NOT WEIRD OK. WE NEED TO MAKE SOMEONE WHO CAN NOT ONLY LEAD OUR ARMIES IN THE IMPENDING WAR OF THE GODS, BUT SOME WHO CAN NOT BE STOPPED FOR ANYTHING
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{SCENE OPENS WITH ZEUS AND ARES STANDING WITH EACH OTHER IN A ROOM}
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{END SCENE}
emitz12 edited the scene titled "THE BEGINNING" a year ago
emitz12 added a new scene titled "THE BEGINNING" a year ago
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{THE NARRATORS LINE IS SAID WHEN ATHELETIS IS FIGHTING THE SOLDIERS}
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NARRATOR
THERE COMES A TIME IN HISTORY WHEN THERE IS A GOD THAT HAS UNQUESTIONABLE POWER, UNQUESTIONABLE BRAVERY THIS IS ATHELETIS, AND THIS IS HIS STORY. FROM HIS A-TYPICAL BEGINNING, TO HIS HEROIC ENDING.
emitz12 edited dialogue in "The Back Story" a year ago [view]
ATHELETIS
I AM ATHELETIS! GOD OF ALL THINGS MANLY AND TESTOSTERONE FILLED
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NARRATOR
- NOW YOU ARE PROBABLY WONDERING WHY THERE IS A SHIRTLESS MAN FIGHTING A BUNCH OF GUYS, AND I UNDERSTAND THAT. ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT IS ATHELETIS, GOD OF ALL THINGS MANLY, AND THIS IS HIS STORY
emitz12 edited dialogue in "The Back Story" a year ago [view]
ATHELETIS
- I AM ATHELETIS! GOD OF ALL THINGS MANLY AND TESTOSTERONE FILLED
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{WHEN ATHELETIS SAYS GOD.. HE JUMPS OUT FROM UNDER THE PILE AND PUSHES ALL THE PEOPLE DOWN}
emitz12 edited an action in "The Back Story" a year ago [view]
NARRATOR- NOW YOU ARE PROBABLY WONDERING WHY THERE IS A SHIRTLESS MAN FIGHTING A BUNCH OF GUYS, AND I UNDERSTAND THAT
emitz12 edited an action in "The Back Story" a year ago [view]
{WHEN ATHELETIS SAYS