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This is your first scene. Last edited by AsvpAuburn, 10 months ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

InT - Messy HOme - Day

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ANGELINA, A 16 year old girl bubbly girl, sits in the living room watching the olympic's dreaming she was part of it.

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Sylvia, Her mother who is in her mid 30's and dresses like she is a teenager still with a very plump body,who despise's her daughter walks into the room with her Boyfriend, Logan, who is 20 years old and verbally and physically abuses Sylvia because of the way she treats her daughter

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Sylvia

Why do you always watch this crap?!

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Sylvia Grabs a lighter lits it up and slowly huffs and puffs it out in Angelinas face

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Angelina holds in the cough as she continues to ignore her over the top mother

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Logan

Sylvia. Give your daughter a break. Just because she move faster than you shoving that cigarette down your throat does not mean you treat her like trash. This is why your ex husband left you now

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Angelina smirks and smiles as she looks at logan

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Logan gently smiles back at Angelina but quickly stops as Syliva begins to yell at logan

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Syliva

Why are you looking at that Whore like that?!

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Logan looks at Sylvia and laughs

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Logan

Youre really serious when calling your daughter a whore when youre dressed like the skank version of Madonna

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Logan looks at Syliva and slaps her as her face lands to the ground

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Logan (CONT'D)

Your daughter hasnt even said one word to you and you continue to talk to her like mess when she is just sitting there not bothering a soul.

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Syliva gets up and rubs her face as it slowly begins to turn red she looks at logan and goes off into the kitchen grabs her a vodka bottle and goes outside

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Syliva looks at Angelina as she walks by Angelina as she is headed outside

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Syliva

I hope you dont think you would ever be like them. Or even make it big like them. Youre just going to be like your deadbeat sister. A lonely little girl who has to sell her body for money.

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Sylvia walks outside and slams the door behind her

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Angelina bows her head and starts whispering to herself

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ANgelina

but youre the whore who my father left because he caught you cheating with to many men.

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Logan looks at Angelina and walked up to her to sit beside her to watch the olympics

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Logan

What you want to be when youre older? a Olympian?

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Angelina

Why do you ask me that?

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Logans smiles and gives a smirk

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Logan

Because youre always watching something about the Olympics. Always reading or looking something up about it. I Just thought you would because of that.

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Angelina

Well if i wanted to be one, i couldnt anyway. you heard my mother. Im going to end up like my sister..

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Logan scoots closer beside Angelina and look her into her eyes

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logan

Look, Angelina, your mother, seems like she is jealous of you and your sister. Yeah your sister may not made the best decisions of her life but one thing is she is doing way better than your mother is doing now. I mean look at her. She dresses like she is 16 still. Her belly sags over her shorts and she thinks shes the hot candy but she isnt

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Logan rubs angelinas hair behind her ears

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LOgan (CONT'D)

Angelina, if i tell you something will you not tell Sylvia

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Angelina slightly blushes at logan

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Angelina

Okay Douglas....

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Logan looks into Angelina's eye's

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Logan

Well Angelina.... Your mother and I are completely different and you know that. Im still a kids compared to her.

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Angelina looks at logan in shock

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ANgelina

What do you mean you not actually "IN love" with her? Why are you with her then?

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Logan gives a deep breath in

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Logan

For the money babygirl. You know women like your mother who prey and go after young guys like me, are gullible and think we actually care about them and love them. I just want the money. Whats even more pathetic about her is she actually spends more money on young guys like me than her own kid. Which makes this experience better

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Angelina gives a look of shock which is overcomed by laugher

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Angelina

Well... Thats interesting

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Angelina picks up the remote to the tv and turns it to another channel. Logan looks at angelina in a strange way

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Logan

Thats....It?

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Angelina stares blankly at the tv and nods her head

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Angelina

Yeah, thats it.. Why?

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Logan

I just thought you would say more than just that.. I have another reason also if you want to know

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Angelina stares at logan in a calm way

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ANgelina

What is it?

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Logan grabs angelinas hands

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Logan (CONT'D)

well, see, Angelina, Other than the fact im getting that money from your mom. The only other reason why im still using her is for you.

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Angelina gives a sort of a chuckle

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ANgelina

Ha, Me?

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Logan

Yea you.

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Angelina grabs her hands out of Logan. Stands up and starts laughing

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Angelina

And please tell me how its for "me"

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Logan looks up at Angelina

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Logan

Angelina, Im in love with you.

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Angelina gives a face of worry towards logan

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Logan (CONT'D)

Yeah, i know, im in love with my girlfriends 16 year old daughter. its weird i know but you, you just make everything feel alive. Ever since i made you in while you was a freshmen and i was a senior. you have always been so full of life and i dont know, i just know i feel like im in love with you.

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Angelina goes to another couch to sit down

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Angelina

Well, logan i can tell you the weather is nice over here

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Logan rolls his eyes, stands up and walks towards angelina and sits beside her on the other couch, and grabs her hands once again and holds on to them

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Logan

im so serious Angelina.

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Logan comes closer to angelina to the point where his lips are near her cheek and he kissed her cheek

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Sylvia soon walks in with a brown bag and a beer bottle inside she sees logan as he kissed angelina cheek, syivia is in shocked and takes out her beer bottle and throws it upon angelinas and logans head

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Logan (CONT'D)

WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!

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Sylvia looks at Logan in complete confusion and disgust.

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SYlvia

YOU WANT TO ASK ME WHAT IM DOING?! WHAT IM DOING?! AND YOURE IN HERE KISSING MY DAUGHTER?! QUESTION IS WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!

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Sylvia's tears starts to form in her eyes, she falls to the ground beating her fists onto the ground

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Sylvia (CONT'D)

OH MY LORDDDDDDDD! GOD WHY! WHY ME!

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Angelina is looking in quite shock, she feels bad at first but then starts laughing at her mother calling the lord for her karma

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Sylvia (CONT'D)

OH MY GODDDD!!!! WHY?!!!!

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Angelina and Logan both start to smirk and laugh. Sylvia soon stops stands up walked up to Angelina with some tears falling she looks into Angelinas eyes and slapped Angelina. As soon as Angelina hits the ground Logan quickly picks her up

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Sylvia (CONT'D)

Ever since you came out the womb you have been in a disgrace.

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Logan walks up to Sylvia

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Logan

You Bit..........

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Logan is interrupted by Angelina and the softness of her voice

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Angelina

Its okay Logan.. Dont worry about her. She isnt worth it... Lets just go....

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Angelina and Logan heads to the door with sylvia following behind them

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Sylvia

Oh no. Logan you arent going no where!

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Logan looks at Sylvia with a stank look on his face, pushes her out of his way.

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Logan

Watch me...

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Logan opens the door and approaches Angelina in front of her. Walks to Logans car, As Sylvia shouts from behind.

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SYlvia

Yall going to have to come back sometime soon! And when you do come back Angelina you can go live with your father!!!! And Logan you know you going to come back to this babyboy!

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Sylvia slams the door shut once she sees Logan and Angelina takes off

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