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AsvpAuburn edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. AsvpAuburn made 47 other changes.
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Syliva
I hope you dont think you would ever be like them. Or even make it big like them. Youre just going to be like your deadbeat sister. A lonely whore who has to sell her body for money.
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logan
Look, Angelina, your mother, I feel, is jealous of you and your sister. Yeah your sister may not made the best decisions of her life but one thing is she is doing way better than your mother is doing now. I mean look at her. She dresses like she is 16 still. Her belly sags over her shorts and she thinks shes the hot candy but she isnt
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Angelina
Well if i wanted to be one, i couldnt anyway. you heard my mother. Im going to end up like my sister..
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Angelina
Why do you ask me that?
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Logan
Youre really serious when calling your daughter a whore when youre dressed like the skank version of Madonna
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SYlvia
YOU WANT TO ASK ME WHAT IM DOING?! WHAT IM DOING?! AND YOURE IN HERE KISSING MY DAUGHTER?! QUESTION IS WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
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Sylivia looks at logan in complete confusion
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Logan
WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
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Sylivia soon walks in with a brown bag and a beer bottle inside she sees logan as he kissed angelina cheek, syivia is in shocked and takes out her beer bottle and throws it upon angelinas and logans head
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Sylivia soon walks in on logan as he kissed angelina cheeks, syivia is in shock and gets
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Logan comes closer to angelina to the point where his lips are near her cheek and he kissed her cheeks
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Logan
im so serious Angelina
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Logan rolls his eyes, stands up and walks towards angelina and sits beside her on the other couch, and grabs her hands once again and holds on to them
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Angelina
Well, logan i can tell you the weather is nice over here
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Angelina goes to another couch to sit down
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Logan
Yeah, i know, im in love with my girlfriends 16 year old daughter. its weird i know but you, you just make everything feel alive. Ever since i made you in while you was a freshmen and i was a senior. you have always been so full of life and i dont know, i just know i feel like im in love with you.
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Logan
Yeah, i know, im in love with my girlfriends 16 year old daughter
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Angelina gives a face of worry towards logan
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Logan
Angelina, Im in love with you.
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Logan looks up at Angelina
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Angelina
And please tell me how its for "me"
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Angelina grabs her hands out of logans stands up and starts laughing
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Logan
Yea you.
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ANgelina
Ha, Me?
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Angelina gives a sort of a chuckle
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Logan
well, see, Angelina, Other than the fact im getting that money from your mom. The only other reason why im still using her is for you.
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Logan
For the money babygirl. You know women like your mother who prey and go after young guys like me, are gullible and think we actually care about them and love them. I just want the money. Whats even more pathetic about her is she actually spends more money on young guys like me than her own kid. Which makes this experience better
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Logan
well, see, Angelina, Other than the fact im using your spoiled mother for the money
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Logan
Well see other than the fact, im using your mother for her money.
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Logan grabs angelinas hands
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ANgelina
What is it?
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Angelina stares at logan in a calm yet flirty way
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Logan
I just thought you would say more than just that.. I have another reason also if you want to know
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Angelina
Yeah, thats it.. Why?
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Angelina stares blankly at the tv and nods her head
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Logan
Thats....It?
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Angelina picks up the remote to the tv and turns it to another channel. Logan looks at angelina in a strange way
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Angelina
Well... Thats interesting
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Angelina gives a look of shock which is overcomed by laugher
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Loganw
Well you see, for the money. You know old women like her who go after guys like me who say they like older women really like the money they give us.
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Logan gives a deep breath in
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ANgelina
What do you mean you not actually "IN love" with her? Why are you with her then?
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Angelina looks at logan in shock
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Logan
Well Angelina.... Your mother and I are completely different and you know that. Im still a kids compared to her.
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Logan looks into Angelina's eye's
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Angelina
Okay logan....
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Angelina slightly blushes at logan
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