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This is your first scene. Last edited by esdiaz90, on 11/28/2013. 0 comments. More scene info.

ext. Basketball Court - Day

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A basketball flies through a hoop. Aurora shouts loudly while her friend kathy grabs it.

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Aurora

Point Game, my ball!

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Kathy passes her the ball. Brittany quickly snaps into movement. Kathy moves slightly but makes no attempt to block her shot. Aurora shoots and scores. kathy starts walking away.

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Kathy

Alright,.I’m done for today. I’m tired.

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brittany

Aw, c’mon just one more game.

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kathy

Aw, c’mon just one more game.

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brittany

i don’t care. Just one more game.

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Kathy

you really don’t want to go home do you? Is it because of your dad?

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brittany

Don’t bring my dad into this, im asking for one more game. You’re in or not?

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Kathy has an undecided look on her face. Brittany stares for a moment and starts walking towards her building. A young man passes by her.

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Eddie

Can I play?

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Brittany doesn’t even bother to look at him and keeps walking home.

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int. Brittany's Apartment - Evening

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Brittany puts the basketball on the floor and walks over to the kitchen where her dad is washes dishes.

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Brittany

Hey

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Brittany (CONT'D)

I'm sorry dad.

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dad

I should break this damn thing.

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Dad walks hurridly to the kitchen while Aurora follows quickly behind, She clings to her dad and tries to pry the ball from his hands.

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Brittany

It wasn't my fault.

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Brittany slowly gets up from the ground.

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Dad

It was your fault. If it wasnt for your stupid naggin, they would still be here!

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Brittany

I was just a little girl, I wanted to play a game with my family how was I supposed to know?

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Brittany (CONT'D)

What about me, I'm your daughter.

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Dad

After what you did, you were never my daughter.

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Brittany

Fine, I never wanted to be the daughter of a jackass father like you.

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Dad

Get out of my house!

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Eddie

you're out here pretty late.

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BRittany

my dad kicked me out.

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Eddie

Why?

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Eddie (CONT'D)

Want to talk about it?

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Brittany

I hardly remember it. It was so long ago, I was only a little girl, my dad was at work and I was coming home from playing basketball with mom and Sam. I had this ball in my hands, right before, (shows ball)

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Ext. Basketball Court - Night

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Dad gets from his bed and walks out into the hallway near a window. Stays looking out, probably for Brittany. A woman appears next to him without him knowing.

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Mom

There's a little girl outside all by herself. No girl should be alone at this time of night. I wwonder where her father is.

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Dad looks towards elevator but the woman talking is gone. He just assumes she left.

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Eddie

Your dad kicks you out and the only thing you bring with you is your basketball. Hey, wanna play a game right now?

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Brittany

Uh, right now? I don’t know.

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Eddie steals ball, runs to court, makes a shot in. Brittany comes runningcomes running to make her shot but flashback of dad grieving happens and she falls to the ground. A hand helps her up. Its her dad.

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Brittany (CONT'D)

DAd? Why are you here?

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Dad

I made a mistake aurora. No father should do that to his daughter.

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Brittany

I thought I wasn't your daughter.

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Dad

You'll always be mu daughter. I can't lose you too. Forgive me?

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Brittany takes the ball from her dad annd jumps into a basketball pose. Only if you win. Dad smiles and races towards her. a little further away, Eddie places his hand on a women's back.

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Eddie

Hey mom

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mom

Did you talk to your sister?

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Eddie

Yes, I think they'll be just fine.

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they both walk away and slowly and vanish

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