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BaileyNeve edited an action in "Scene 2" on 03/26/2015. BaileyNeve made 16 other changes.
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INT. - GUEST ROOM - NIGHT
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INT - GUEST ROOM - NIGHT
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She rushes her plump body down the hall. They follow her.
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Dad
I'll explain later. Prepare the guest room.
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Momma
(suspicious)
Who's this?
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She turns her back to see a tattered and torn Tom Chandler.
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Momma
(with back turned)
I was beginning to worry...I--
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The coziness shown on the outside is nothing compared to what is on the inside. It's dim, sporadically dotted with lanterns. A light blue kettle sits on top of the stove, producing a baby cloud of steam. On the wall there is a hand stitched quote. "No kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted - Aesop". Straight ahead is a large woman bent over, poking the fire. Her back is turned towards us. This is MOMMA>
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INT. Int. - LAurence home - Night
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We focus on the doctor as he lifts up some horrifying looking pair of shear-like objects. He snaps them open and closed, and gives a chuckle. It's very evident the doctor loves doing his job.
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Daniel
We're not entirely sure ourselves.
BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/26/2015 [view]
Kenny jones
Well, it's been an absolute pleasure!
BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/26/2015 [view]
Kenny jones (CONT'D)
When you recognized my name, when I introduced myself, I liked that...Nay, I LOVED that. As much as I hate to admit it, I love attention. Plain and simple, I think that fame would suit me well. When you are a man like me who kills, steals, and terrorizes for a livin', you need a reputation. Without a reputation, you're nothing but a petty criminal that no one gives two shits about. So, that being said, I'm going to let you live. When someone comes to rescue you, you're going to have to give them an explanation about this mess.
BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/26/2015 [view]
Kenny jones
Brother, I'm taking that money no matter what. Now, I was planning on you being somewhat cadaverous, after that little stumble you too, so I don't give a tinkers damn whether I have your blessing to take that there money. Now I--
BaileyNeve edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/26/2015 [view]
Kenny pats Charlie on the back. Tom falls on his back, exhausted.
BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/26/2015 [view]
Kenny jones
(dismissive)
That's great! Now am I imagining things or is that a big ass treasure chest?
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