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BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. BaileyNeve made 20 other changes.
BaileyNeve edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Tom
What're you drinkin'?
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Attorney
For Christ's sake, why didn't you just tell him in the first place?
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Accountant
Bourbon.
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Tom
Ain't nothing to lose sleep over. Forget I asked.
BaileyNeve inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Accountant
If I wanted you to know what I was drinkin', I'd make it known to you by telling you what I was drinkin'.
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Tom
Just askin'.
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The Stage coach is a beautiful dark blue, accented with thin gold colored markings. It is pulled by two large, brown and white horses. Atop the coach is a lone driver.
BaileyNeve edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
As the credits sequence rolls we follow a gorgeous stage coach rolling through beautiful Kentucky backwoods scenery. We start our journey in the mid-day, with each cut it gets later and later into the day. It finally is dark. As we stalk the carriage we can see three heads bobbing up and down, in the dimly lit cab. We see a caption fade onto the screen reading, "1865, KENTUCKY". It's a beautiful night. An unbelievably starry night. If you look closely you might be able spot a few constellations. It's about 10 o'clock now, and all is quiet besides the light trotting of the horses hooves.
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Acountant
None of your damn business, nosy son of a bitch.
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Tom chandler
What're you drinkin'?
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We see the three men lightly shaking inside the cab of the carriage. The carriage is lit by two lanterns hanging in opposing corners. One by himself on one bench, sitting next to a huge chest filled with $10,000, this is TOM CHANDLER. Tom is a handsome man in his mid-thirties, clean shaven, combed hair, looking like a true gentleman. On the opposite bench we see two awkward looking men. One is Tom's accountant the other, his attorney. The Attorney, fat is wearing a suit that looks like it is on the verge of bursting, he is bald and has a handlebar mustache. His accountant, is quite beastly. Though wearing a nice suit, the man is undeniably ugly.
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Tom chandler
Listen, we're almost there. Don't you worry. We've made it this far.
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Fat man wipes sweat from his forehead with his handkerchief.
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Accountant holds up a bottle of whiskey, tries to hand it to the attorney.
BaileyNeve deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Accountant
(Mumbling, with British accent)
How about some booze, friend!
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The attorney declines with disgust. Accountant shrugs. He takes a large swig from the bottle
BaileyNeve deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
attorney
If we're robbed out here, it's nobody's fault but yours. It's not safe to be travelling with that much money.
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tom chandler
(Uneasy)
I'm well aware.
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Silence. As the three men sit with blank stares on their faces, we hear a thundering noise growing louder and louder with each second.
BaileyNeve edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
We see the three men lightly shaking inside the cab of the carriage. The carriage is lit by two lanterns hanging in opposing corners. One by himself on one bench, sitting next to a huge chest filled with $10,000, this is TOM CHANDLER. Tom is a handsome man in his mid-thirties, clean shaven, combed hair, looking like a true gentleman. On the opposite bench we see two awkward looking men. One is Tom's accountant the other, his attorney. The Attorney, fat is wearing a suit that looks like it is on the verge of bursting, he is bald and has a handlebar mustache. His accountant, is quite beastly. Though wearing a nice suit, the man is undeniably ugly. He has jagged teeth and and ungroomed curly brown hair and looks absolutely plastered. Plastered, but extremely relaxed.
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