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joni5ivealive deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008. joni5ivealive made 10 other changes.
joni5ivealive deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
Father
He's going to tell. Help m tie him down
joni5ivealive added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
A newscast shows a standoff between a local man and police forces. The unknown man is holding his ex-wife hostage and has set the house on fire. The police are powerless to save the man or the woman inside.
joni5ivealive added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
All the pieces fall together. We realize that the father never won custody of the children. Courtney calls the ex-step mother and warns her that his father is on his way to her home.
joni5ivealive added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
"Local woman burned alive in her own home"
joni5ivealive inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
In the struggle a picture of their mother is knocked off of the fireplace mantle and shatters on the ground. The boys are stopped by this occurance and notice there is a large portion of the picture that is folded under itself. Courtney unfolds the paper to reveal that it is a newspaper article that reads...
joni5ivealive added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
The father leaves and Courtney struggles to get free. Michael is holds Courtney with all his strength, terrified of what may happen to him if he gets free.
joni5ivealive added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
Michael
I'll hold him down.
joni5ivealive inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
Father
He's going to tell. Help me tie him down.
joni5ivealive inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
Father
He's going to tell. Help m tie him down
joni5ivealive inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 02/27/2008 [view]
INT. housenight
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