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StevenD edited dialogue in "Investigated" a year ago. StevenD made 74 other changes.
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woods
(Smiling)
It means Adam Grant's ass is mine.
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martinez
What do you thinks all this means?
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woods
(Smiling)
He's mine.
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Woods
Well maybe we need to pay the doctor a little visit.
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Martinez
Don't know. Haven't been able to reach him.
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Woods
(Looking at the house as if he has x-ray vision)
What's his story?
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Martinez
The man in the photo is an OB/GYN. He was Mrs. Grant's prenatal care doctor.
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Outside, Detectives Woods and Martinez are watching the house. They are discussing new evidence. Martinez pulls out the photo of the man they showed Adam.
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Martinez
The man in the photo is an OB/GYN.
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Outside, Detectives Woods and Martinez are watching the house. They are discussing new evidence.
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INT. ext./int. Detective's car- day
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The page where she kept the photo features a passage which reads, "Suffer the little children to come unto Me."
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Nikki falls into Adam's arms, and he is filled with compassion and guilt for thinking this wonderful, brave woman could betray him. He lifts her up so that her eyes meet his. The gradually close the gap between them, and share their first kiss.
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nikki
His name was Joseph. He would have been a year old today. You wanted to know why we never had children? After Joseph died, I just couldn't go through it anymore. I lost my son, and I almost lost you. I thought, "If I were given a chance to erase this memory... to not know the pain... to not have to live with it, I'd probably take it." So I tried to make that decision for you. But, I realized, not having that memory also means erasing our son.
(Crying harder)
And I don't want to lose what I have left of him!
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Adam's gaze narrows. He's expecting to hear that Nikki cheated on him. He's expecting to hear that Holly was right all along. Nikki takes Adam into the loving room and they sit down on the couch. She pulls out the Bible from between the cushions where she hid it. She opens it up, and it falls to a particular page. It's been marked with a picture. The picture is a sonogram.
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Adam's gaze narrows. He's expecting to hear that Nikki cheated on him. He's expecting to hear that Holly was right all along.
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nikki
I didn't want you to share in the pain. I didn't want you to know how badly this hurts. But, Kevin was right, it's not fair to keep it from you.
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Adam looks confused and stares at Nikki waiting for her to explain.
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nikki
(Leaning up to look at Adam)
It isn't you.
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adam
I know this must be tough for you. If I could change it, make everything the way it was, I would. I'm trying so hard to remember...
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Nikki still doesn't respond. Adam walks up behind her, and touches her on the shoulder. When she turns around, her face is streaming with tears. She's done the best she can to hold it back, but she just can't anymore. She falls into Adam's chest and let's her pain wet the front of Adam's shirt.
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adam
Nikki?
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Nikki goes silent and doesn't respond. Her back is still to Adam.
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adam
All this space, I'm sure we could have had a happy family here.
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nikki
Yeah... we thought about it.
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Nikki turns her back to Adam, and pretends to be focused on something.
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adam
Did we want a family?
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Nikki looks up and smiles at Adam. Adam smiles back, but it's evident that his curiosity hasn't been satisfied yet.
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nikki
All couples have problems. We had our share, but nothing we couldn't handle.
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adam
Were we happy? Together I mean. Did we have any problems?
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Nikki
Not that long really. My parents were married for 25 years before my father passed. Let's just say we haven't gotten that far yet.
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adam
How long have we been married?
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Adam looks at Nikki for a moment, and decides to try and either validate Holly's accusations, or else dismiss them with the truth.
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nikki
(Smiling)
Yes honey, I'm fine.
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adam
Are you sure you're ok? Acting kind of weird today.
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Adam goes downstairs and begins to put the groceries away and Nikki comes down soon after, once again looking happy with her face dried. She takes over putting the groceries away.
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Adam decides to wait on Nikki downstairs, and walks away.
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nikki
I'll be down in a minute Adam.
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adam
Nikki, what's going...
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Nikki
I'll be down in a minute.
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Before Adam can make it in, Nikki speaks and stops him.
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adam
Nikki... I got the milk. Is everything...
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As he passes the coffee table, he notices that the Bible is gone. He makes his way to the stairs and to the room. As he gets to the threshold, he sees Nikki sitting on the bed with her back turned toward the door. The lights are off in the room, and Nikki is silent.
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