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Paul smiles and walks out of the shot going to church with his family.
He returns to his room where the cross has been hooked back on the wall and in good shape.
Paul goes to the bathroom and wipes away the words on his body.
We will leave in a little bit, why dont you get cleaned up.
Paul nods his head with tears in his eyes.
You know, we can talk about this with lunch after church with your mom and I. What do you say.
Dad goes over and gives Paul a hug for comfort.
Its okay, come here.
Oh dad, I messed up big time. I've realized that I haven't been true to myself. I have been trying to fill this hole in me with praise and drugs and alcohol. Things that aren't me. I need help.
Paul! Paul! What's wrong.
His dad runs in
After seeing this Paul goes into tears.
He looks over and the cross falls to the ground.
Wakes up in his bed with more writing on himself. He goes to the mirror to check what it says.
Same shot if the party as before
Paul looks nervous and voids eye contact with his dad.
Okay I trust you, stay safe.
Yeah, he got that new COD game. I'll be back late again.
You hanging out with Juan again tonight?
Is what I'm doing right? I am making a lot of people happy by being there right? Is this really not me?
Paul walks down the hall and thinks in his head
Paul packs up and walks out of the shot
I said are you going to tear it up again tonight?
Jaun snaps in Paul's face
Hey man you hear me?
Paul sits there uneasily and looks nervous as people talk about the party
It's Friday everyone is talking about a new party that takes place tonight