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fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. fabio18 made 34 other changes.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul smiles and walks out of the shot going to church with his family.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He returns to his room where the cross has been hooked back on the wall and in good shape.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul goes to the bathroom and wipes away the words on his body.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
We will leave in a little bit, why dont you get cleaned up.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul nods his head with tears in his eyes.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
You know, we can talk about this with lunch after church with your mom and I. What do you say.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad goes over and gives Paul a hug for comfort.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
Its okay, come here.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul
Oh dad, I messed up big time. I've realized that I haven't been true to myself. I have been trying to fill this hole in me with praise and drugs and alcohol. Things that aren't me. I need help.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
Paul! Paul! What's wrong.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
His dad runs in
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After seeing this Paul goes into tears.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He looks over and the cross falls to the ground.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Wakes up in his bed with more writing on himself. He goes to the mirror to check what it says.
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fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Same shot if the party as before
fabio18 added a transition in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul looks nervous and voids eye contact with his dad.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
Okay I trust you, stay safe.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
PauL
Yeah, he got that new COD game. I'll be back late again.
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dad
You hanging out with Juan again tonight?
fabio18 added a transition in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
PauL
Is what I'm doing right? I am making a lot of people happy by being there right? Is this really not me?
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul walks down the hall and thinks in his head
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul packs up and walks out of the shot
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul
Haha sure.
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Laughs nervously
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Juan
I said are you going to tear it up again tonight?
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul
Huh? What?
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Jaun snaps in Paul's face
fabio18 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Juan
Hey man you hear me?
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Paul sits there uneasily and looks nervous as people talk about the party
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
It's Friday everyone is talking about a new party that takes place tonight
fabio18 added a transition in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
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