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Quick pitch

A boy of 16 is on a bus going to see the girl that he loves. However, he starts talking to himself and pretty soon, he gets worked up over it. He calls her demanding that they talk, and when he finally gets off the bus and walks to go see her, all he can say is "I love you" while they hug and the short film ends.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

Recent changes

DanteLord added an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/25/2008. DanteLord made 9 other changes. more
BOY looks around. There's still no one on the bus.
TheVisionBeautiful commented on the scene "This is your first scene.." on 08/20/2008. more
Is this still a work in progress? Because I don't see how this is a whole short film. It's so short I'm not even sure it's a slice of life, but it does seem like pretty good set-up for some more scenes.
DanteLord added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/14/2008. DanteLord made 18 other changes. more
BOY
Oh. Hey.
bled09 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/14/2008. bled09 made 4 other changes. more
Boy
(Singing to himself while background music plays "Never Tear Us Apart" by INXS)
"And never tear us apart..."
 

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