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Two Albanian teenage boys in a blood feud. One seeking to avenge his father, the other hiding in isolation. That is until he escapes his home and ends up on the other side of the world. Two years have passed, the boy has now prepared for the moment he faces his killer.

Project Type: Feature Film (Epic)

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Vewtour edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/01/2012. Vewtour made 121 other changes. more
sergio (CONT'D)
I have no problem helping you. Protecting you even. So did you or did you not escape from Albania and come to Italy thinking you'll be free at last? Don't underestimate your killer. Nowhere is safe.
Vewtour edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/31/2012. Vewtour made 30 other changes. more
The woman just nods her head while she takes a sip of her espresso. Edon picks up his coffee and finishes it. He stands up to leave the table. At same time he was able to reach in his pocket and his wallet.
Vewtour added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/31/2012. Vewtour made 31 other changes. more
Black screen.
Vewtour edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/31/2012. more
As he is witnessing his father getting beaten, he tries to hold himself back from interferring. Instead he does nothing but watches in horor, his face pressed against the railing. When he sees Gregor pull out a gun, his eyes widen. The sound of the gun shot causes him to flinch. When the next two shots fire, he flinches for a second and third time. He shuts his eyes and keeps it closed as tears start falling down on his face.
Vewtour edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/31/2012. Vewtour made 4 other changes. more
As he watches his father getting beaten,
 

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