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olbeyer19 added an action in "Ext. Grandma's house-Late afternoon" two years ago. olbeyer19 made 33 other changes.
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Max and Evan are sitting on the floor in front of the television in their grandmother's living room.
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olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Ext. School-Afternoon" two years ago
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Max
Really dad? Is it true? It is isn't it? That's why we're going to grandma's house? So you can see her! Right dad?
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Max's is cut off mid-sentence when Evan announces to his that their Grandmother has arrived.
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Max
I dont wanna get use to it! I won't!
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Evan
I'm not upset about it, its going to be something to get used too.
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Int. Kitchen-Morning" two years ago
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Int. Kitchen-Morning" two years ago
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Int. Kitchen-Morning" two years ago
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Evan
I'm not upset about it
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Max
(Max stutters as he forces his words out his mouth too quickly)
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Max
You-ou arent?
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Evan
Are you really mad about what dad said this morning?
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Max and Evan are just getting out of school and are waiting for their Grandmother to pick them up. They don't speak until Evan breaks the silence between them.
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Ext-School-Afternoon" two years ago
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INT. BOB IS HAVING BREAKFAST WITH HID KIDS BEFORE HE DROPS THEM OFF TO SCHOOL. BOB PLANS ON TELLING KIDS ABOUT HIS NEW GIRLFRIEND, SOPHIA, BUT HE IS VERY NERVOUS BECAUSE HE HAS NO IDEA HOW HIS CHILDREN WILL REACT. WHEN BOB FINALLY BREAKS THE NEWS TO THEM, MAX, HIS YOUNGEST SON DOESN'T SEEM TO HAVE A REACTION. ON THE OTHER HAND, EVAN SEEMS TO DISLIKE THE IDEA AND BEGINS TO THROW A FIT
olbeyer19 deleted the scene "This is your first scene." two years ago
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bob
( shouting )
Max! Evan! It's time to come down for breakfast!
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INT. BOB IS HAVING BREAKFAST WITH HID KIDS BEFORE HE DROPS THEM OFF TO SCHOOL. BOB PLANS ON TELLING KIDS ABOUT HIS NEW GIRLFRIEND, SOPHIA, BUT HE IS VERY NERVOUS BECAUSE HE HAS NO IDEA HOW HIS CHILDREN WILL REACT. WHEN BOB FINALLY BREAKS THE NEWS TO THEM, MAX, HIS YOUNGEST SON DOESN'T SEEM TO HAVE A REACTION. ON THE OTHER HAND, EVAN SEEMS TO DISLIKE THE IDEA AND BEGINS TO THROW A FIT
olbeyer19 deleted a slugline in "Bob tells kids big news" two years ago [view]
INT. .Bob is having breakfast with hid kids before he drops them off to school. Bob plans on telling kids about his new girlfriend, Sophia, but he is very nervous because he has no idea how his children will react. When Bob finally breaks the news to them, Max, his youngest son doesn't seem to have a reaction. On the other hand, Evan seems to dislike the idea and begins to throw a fit
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INT. Bob
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bob
( shouting )
Max! Evan! It's time to come down for breakfast.
olbeyer19 inserted a slugline in "Bob tells kids big news" two years ago [view]
INT. .Bob is having breakfast with hid kids before he drops them off to school. Bob plans on telling kids about his new girlfriend, Sophia, but he is very nervous because he has no idea how his children will react. When Bob finally breaks the news to them, Max, his youngest son doesn't seem to have a reaction. On the other hand, Evan seems to dislike the idea and begins to throw a fit
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Bob tells kids big news" two years ago
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bob
( shouting )
Max! Evan! It's time to come down for breakfast!
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Bob tells kids big news" two years ago
olbeyer19 edited the scene titled "Bob tells kids big news" two years ago
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