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GoranMostecak edited a shot in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
GoranMostecak added a shot in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
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Marko sjedi i pilji u prazno. Počinje zvoniti alarm za tablete. Uzima tablete, gleda bočicu kao da je vidi prvi put. Otvara prozor i baca bočicu.
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Marko sjedi i pilji u prazno. Počinje zvoniti alarm za tablete. Uzima tablete, gleda bočic
GoranMostecak edited an action in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
INT. - Markov auto
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INT. - markov auto
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Toma i Nenad odlaze u auto i odlaze. Marko ostaje stajati na parkiralištu. Počinje hiperventilirati do granice da mora kleknuti da dođe k sebi.
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Marko
Primio na znanje..pozorniče.
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Marko pilji u pod. Diže glavu.
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Tome
Gle, došao sam ovdje da te upozorim. Ovaj put te neću moći zaštiti. Šta god da napraviš..nemoj prestati uzimati tablete.
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MArko
Igram..
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Marko se lagano nasmije na Tominu izjavu.
GoranMostecak added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
Toma
Ne, pala je. Znaš i sam da je bila bolesna. Nema potrebe da se igraš detektiva.
GoranMostecak added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
Marko
Znači netko ju je gurnuo..
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Toma
Pala je niz stepenice. Nije..nije preživjela.
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MARko
Kakvu nezgodu?
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Toma
Slušaj, htio sam iz poštovanja doći ovdje. Tvoja mama, imala je nezgodu.
GoranMostecak added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
Marko
Dobro, nisam dugo čuo dobru.
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Toma
Slušaj, imam..imam loše vijesti.
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Marko kimne prema Nenadu u znaku pozdrava.
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Toma
Marko, ovo je Nenad.
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GoranMostecak edited a shot in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago [view]
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Marko duboko udahne i nastavi, ulazi u lift.
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Marko nakratko zastaje.
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Nepoznat
Šuti jebem ti mater prljavu.
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Marko hoda prema liftu. Iz susjednog stana čuje se cvilež pasa. Čuje se kako netko uče psa.
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INT. - HODNIK ZGRADE
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TOma
Ako se želiš boriti protiv rasizma onda odi u pedere. Jesi vidio kada kako izgleda djevojka od 16 godina nakon što je šiptari dohvate.Ne..mi smo ovdje za prosječnog čovjeka, za ženu koja kopa po smeću, za samohranu majku koju tuče pijani muž. Mi ne mijenjamo svijet, mi ga..kontroliramo da ostane u granicama normale.I možda jednog dana ovo ludilo prestane.
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Nenad i Toma izlaze do auta i prilaze Marku.
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Toma
Evo ga, pusti mene da pričam.
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INT. Policijski auto
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Nenad i Toma čekaju u autu da Marku završi smjena.
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INT. EXT. - westgate
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