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celticknot12 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 01/22/2013. celticknot12 made 12 other changes. more
dan
(Looks dismayed as he warily watches Barry's finger)
Oh. Great.
CommanderOfPencils added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/22/2013. CommanderOfPencils made 6 other changes. more
He rides this bus the same time everyday--just like the rest of us.
celticknot12 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/22/2013. more
There's no talking for a long while. BARRY keeps staring and DAN notices a girl across the aisle, tapping away at her smartphone and peering at him periodically. The girl's name is Zoe. Zoe's young daughter sat beside her, focused on the book she was reading. A sudden sharp snore caused Dan's attention to turn towards the man a few seats in front of him who was sleeping heavily against the smeared bus window and had the seat next to him claimed with an overflowing backpack. Dan feels a sudden poke on his ear.
CommanderOfPencils added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/22/2013. CommanderOfPencils made 6 other changes. more
Hey!
celticknot12 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 01/22/2013. celticknot12 made 9 other changes. more
dan
(Somewhat freaked out, makes brief eye contact then stares back at his thumbs, which are twiddling anxiously)
Hey.
 

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