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celerymann edited an action in "This is your first scene." 8 months ago. celerymann made 12 other changes. more
Open back on Cody lying on the mattress, Glenn is holding an ice pack on their head, looking concerned. They notice Cody waking up and hurry back to their dance partner, they're both wearing different colours again to different music (or should it be the same as before??). Cody sits up slowly, holding the ice pack on their head.
celerymann edited an action in "This is your first scene." 8 months ago. more
Cody is lying in bed staring at the ceiling. They turn over to turn out the LIGHT. They fall sleep almost instantly. The camera lingers on the complete darkness and after a few seconds classical music fades in.
celerymann edited an action in "This is your first scene." 8 months ago. more
OPTION THING?? Cut to one of the dancers from earlier, Glenn, at a popcorn machine while the same music from the Kitchen is playing. They're filling a bowl with the popcorn. A bucket filled with slime/goo is visible in background. Music stops suddenly again.
celerymann edited an action in "This is your first scene." 8 months ago. more
They visibly become more confused. They find the source of the music (a RECORD PLAYER) and unplug it. The music continues to play and one of the dancers is now looking at them, clearly upset. Cody is taken aback and sits staring at the dancers in bewilderment, not knowing what to do. The record ends suddenly and they pass out.
celerymann edited an action in "This is your first scene." 8 months ago. celerymann made 58 other changes. more
There's minimal lighting this time, mostly candles. Instead of music playing it's a soundscape, each element Cody has a personal connection to. CU of Cody's feet dancing on the stage then cut to wide and we see they're wearing Glenn's clothing. [OPTION; MS of Cody in their clothing from before sitting on the mattress, watching themselves dance. Cut between CUs of both their faces and then to a wide where Cody on the mattress is suddenly gone and replaced by] objects from earlier in the film. Cut to CU of the objects on the bed. Cut to WS of Cody on stage continuing to dance. Clips of Glenn wearing the same clothes and dancing in what would be the partners place flash on screen.
 

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