lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP"
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lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
NICK'S BOYFRIEND
Yeah.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
No, we're leaving.
lorngoody edited dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
Look, Lauren, it's my only day off. I'd like to spend it with my boyfriend. Alone with my boyfriend.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
lauren
Can I please just show you something?
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
NICK'S BOYFRIEND
Yeah.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
Look, Lauren, I'm happy you're not drunk right now, but it's my only day off. I'd like to spend it with my boyfriend.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
lauren
Wait!
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
We were just leaving.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
NICK'S BOYFRIEND
Yeah.
lorngoody edited an action in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
LAUREN slaps NICK across the face. He has little reaction, giving reason to believe this happens on a daily basis.
lorngoody edited dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
Nice, Lauren. And, oh what's this? You're not drunk, for once?
lorngoody added an action in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
LAUREN slaps NICK across the face.
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
Nick
That's really offensive, Lauren. And, oh what's this? You're not drunk, for once?
lorngoody added dialogue in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
lauren
'Sup, gays.
lorngoody added an action in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
NICK is sitting at a table, holding hands with his BOYFRIEND, who shall remain nameless. They are looking lovingly into each other's eyes. BOYFRIEND feeds NICK a bite of coffee cake. NICK shoves a coffee cup into BOYFRIEND's mouth and tips it for him to drink. BOYFRIEND shows physical signs of pain because the coffee is clearly too hot to drink, but NICK continues to pour anyways. ENTER LAUREN.
lorngoody added a slugline in "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago [view]
INT. INT. espresso for us coffee shop —
lorngoody added a new scene titled "COFFEE SHOP" a year ago
lorngoody edited a slugline in "The Desert" a year ago [view]
INT. sprawling desert —
lorngoody added an action in "The Desert" a year ago [view]
CLOSE UP of LAUREN's face. Only her eyes are visible in the helmet. CAMERA ZOOMS OUT to show MARLENE DOTTY riding on the back of the bike, screaming her head off.
lorngoody added an action in "The Desert" a year ago [view]
AERIAL SHOT: LAUREN is seen riding a motorcycle across a long, asphalt road. Heat can be seen rising off the tar. She revs the engine, sending the bike into full speed.
lorngoody added a slugline in "The Desert" a year ago [view]
INT. INT. sprawling desert —