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mightymatt added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/13/2009. mightymatt made 80 other changes.
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JOHN
Has she ever mentioned anything about a horse at night to you?
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GARY
All my life. She's my sister.
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JOHN
How long have you known Jean, Gary?
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JOHN and GARY are on the gold course about to tee off. JOHN looks at GARY just before he swings.
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EXT- GOLF COURSE- EXT
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JOHN drives off in his car. JEAN is in her room on the phone with some girlfriends who debate and talk about what just happened till all hours of the night. JOHN is at home and sits down and watches an old golf match on TV and falls asleep.
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John (V.O.)
Well, no sex tonight then...
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JEAN opens the door and walk in. JOHN stand on the front porch still curious about the situation.
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JEAN
Goodnight, John.
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The car pulls up in front of JEAN's house. Together the two walk the door in silence. At the door JEAN looks at JOHN and gives him a big hug.
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JEAN
Thanks for being so great, John.
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JEAN smiles with tears.
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JOHN
No, well, yes. I guess?
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JOHN glances at the clock on the dashboard.
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JEAN
About time.
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JOHN
what way?
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JEAN
You really feel that way?
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JEAN breathes a sigh of relief.
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JOHN
Uh, sure?
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JOHN (V.O.)
Think! What is she talking about. Say something, she's staring at you, say anything. Hurry!
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JOHN sits for a minutes staring straight ahead. His mind begins to race.
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JEAN
I think...I think I need more time...
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JOHN says playing it safe.
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JOHN
NO!
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JEAN
You think I'm selfish and dumb, don't you?
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JOHN leans forward and looks at the night sky through the windshield.
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JOHN
No night? Horse?
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JEAN
I'm so stupid! I know there is no knight on a horse. I know that!
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JOHN
What?
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JEAN begins to cry. JOHN is puzzled and scared.
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JEAN
Please don't hurt yourself like this. I know I shouldn't have...I feel so...
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John (V.O.)
What?
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JOHN is fuming with anger. JEAN has tears in her eyes.
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JOHN snaps back to reality and looks at JEAN startled.
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JEAN
John?
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John (V.O.)
Yeah right, no refunds. Don't fix my car. Not give me a refund, yeah I'll stick the refund right up their-
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JEAN (V.O)
Maybe I am just too idealistic. I am just waiting for a knight to come riding up on his horse, when I have a really good person sitting right next to me. A person I really enjoy being with and being close too, and a person who rally cares about me. And I am hurting this person because of my stupid little fantasies.
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JOHN (V.O.)
They are going to say it's all my fault. Somehow this is going to be blamed on me, jerks. They will say there is no refunds.
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JEAN (V.O)
Now he's angry. And who can blame him? I know I'd be angry too. Why did I have to put him through this, but this is the way I feel. I'm just not sure about anyhting anymore.
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JOHN (V.O.)
Those thieves! They said everything should be fine! Of course they told me that, that way I would HAVE to come in sooner. And here I paid them $200 for all that work last time...thieves.
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JEAN (V.O)
That's why he's so reluctant to say anything about his own feelings, he is just afraid of being rejected.
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JEAN stares at JOHN with a sweet smile.
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JEAN (V.O)
Aww, he looks upset. I hope he isn't reading this the wrong way. Maybe he wants more! More commintment. Intamacy. Marriage. Kids. Maybe he knows that I have been feeling some reservations. That has to be it.
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Suddenly the coolant light comes on the dashboard. JOHN looks upset.
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JEAN (V.O)
Aww, he looks upset.
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JOHN (V.O.)
Coolant?!
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Suddenly the coolant light comes on the dashboard.
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JOHN (V.O.)
Alright, six months. Let's see, I guess that means we started dating back in October...when was the last time I got my tires checked? Hmm...my levels were checked two months ago, so everything should be okay...
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JEAN stares blankly at her ring finger and back at JOHN who still is keeping an eye on the road.
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JEAN (V.O)
Do I even want this kind of relationship? Sometimes I feel a little confined, maybe I need space. With more space I could really think about whether or not I want to keep going the way we are going. I mean, where are we going? Is this it? Are we just going to see each other at this level of intimacy or is there something more? Marriage? Kids? Do I want this kind of commitment? How well do I even know him?
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