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rlackey added dialogue in "FIRST RIDE ON AN AUTUMN DAY" on 08/06/2008. rlackey made 36 other changes.
rlackey added dialogue in "FIRST RIDE ON AN AUTUMN DAY" on 08/06/2008 [view]
SALES ATTENDANT
Hey Kid, beat it!
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As Andrew stares across the street, a salesman walks up behind him.
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ANDREW
(narration)
My dads' always wanted to come here.
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INT. CLARK HOUSEDAY
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Across the street is a gas station. A car full of teenagers pulls in and Andrew watches them as the attendant fills the tank.
rlackey added dialogue in "FIRST RIDE ON AN AUTUMN DAY" on 08/06/2008 [view]
ANDREW
(narration)
That's what he says.
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Andrew dismounts his bike and walks it over to a 1940 Ford Coupe. He drops his bike to the ground and peers through the window.
rlackey added dialogue in "FIRST RIDE ON AN AUTUMN DAY" on 08/06/2008 [view]
ANDREW
(narration)
Bigger and better.
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Andrew rounds the corner at the end of his street into Main St, he passes a used car lot and stops, staring at the cars, each with a price written across the windshield.
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ANDREW
(narration)
I'm Andrew Clark. My dads always wanted to come here.
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Neighbours are washing thier cars, mowing thier lawns, fixing drainpipes, and kids play in the streets.
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On both sides of the street are large suburban homes each with a large front yard and a concrete driveway. Cars are parked along the street and in driveways.
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Andrew rides his bike out of the driveway and into the street. The street is lined with oak trees, the leaves are deep orange, yellow and brown, falling gently to the ground in a carpet of colour.
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EXT. STREET, SMALL TOWN AMERICADAY
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INT. THE CLARK HOUSEDAY
rlackey edited the scene titled "BIRTHDAY BOY" on 08/05/2008
rlackey edited the scene titled "FIRST RIDE ON AN AUTUMN DAY" on 08/05/2008
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Andrew just stares in disbelief.
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A child, ANDREW CLARK is enjoying his birthday. He is standing at a dining room table with his mother SARAH CLARK and his father ROGER CLARK. The room is full of half unpacked boxes. Around the table are six chairs, each pulled slightly away from the table, seating Andrew's favourite stuffed toy animals. On the table is a beautiful chocolate cake with ten lit candles standing proudly.
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ANDREW
(narration)
This was the best present ever.
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Andrew walks slowly to his new bicycle, touches the handlebars and looks at his father.
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ROGER
Happy Birthday son!
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Andrew walks slowly to his new bicycle, touches the handlebars and looks at his father.
rlackey added an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
Andrew stares in disbelief.
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In the garage are moving boxes and crates stacked to the rafters, and between two boxes is a brand new Red Schwinn bicycle. Roger unties the blindfold.
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Andrew's father roger leads Andrew by the hand, blindfolded into the garage.
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ANDREW CLARK
(narration)
At ten years old, presents are everything.
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ANDREW CLARK
(narration)
So, it's 1955 and I'm now ten years old. There's ten candles, so that makes me ten.
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Andrew leans forward and blows out the candles.
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Andrew leans forward to blow out the candles on his cake.
rlackey edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
A child, ANDREW CLARK is enjoying his birthday. He is standing at a dining room table with his mother SARAH CLARK and his father ROGER CLARK. Around the table are six chairs, each pulled slightly away from the table, seating Andrew's favourite stuffed toy animals. On the table is a beautiful chocolate cake with ten lit candles standing proudly.
rlackey inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
Andrew and his parents lean forward as Andrew blows out the candles on his cake.
rlackey inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
A child, ANDREW CLARK is enjoying his birthday. He is standing at a dining room table with his mother SARAH CLARK and his father ROGER CLARK. Around the table are six chairs, each pulled slightly away from the table, seating Andrew's favourite stuffed toy animals.
rlackey edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
ANDREW CLARK
(narration)
At ten years old, it's all about the presents, and the normal question anybody asks is "what did I get"?
rlackey added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/05/2008 [view]
ANDREW CLARK
(narration)
So, it's 1955 and I just blew out the candles on my 10th birthday cake.
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EXT. STREET, SMALL TOWN, AMERICADAY
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