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Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago. Stylez made 44 other changes.
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
She jerked away and put on her gown, went to sleep.
Stylez added a transition in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“Just think to yourself tonight you failed her, you basically told her it was okay and if I take her life with this very knife, you caused it because your actions say plain as day I want you to say it.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
He cleaned when she got out he burned close to the new scars and she bit my lip.
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita limped to the bathroom, he followed me, he had his lighter. He sat down and got comfortable.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (In ANGER)
“Bitch don't you ever say that to me again or you will suffer and so will she, now take a shower, all this blood and when you done come in here and take your ungrateful ass to sleep; we'll try this again tomorrow until you learn. Oh and Aquita I love you.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
He grabbed her by the throat.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (Crying)
“Nothing!”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“You fucking what!?”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
“I hate you!”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: Cont'd
“Don't you think that I lf I wanted to she’d already be here early already in the dirt 12ft under like the other one; sometimes I swear you fucking make me do this to you, all you gotta do is shut your mouth, respect me and be obedient, but you won't.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
He started raising his voice.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“Relax baby, I was proving a point.”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (Begging)
“I'm sorry, please punish me not her she doesn't deserve it, I do, please Ray I'm begging you.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray turned her over, she was facing him. Placed the blade on her stomach and he did a quick swipe.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
aQuita: (Urgently)
“Please hurry.”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
rAY:
“Is she now not for long if you pull some bullshit like you did today.”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
aQUITA: (bEGGING)
“No baby no I'm so sorry I'll stop just be gentle she's moving.”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (wHISPERING)
“Shhh I'm almost done but if another tear drips I'll add more, is that what you want?”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (wHIMPERING)
“It hurts.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
He placed a knife against her stomach and slice her back with all the other scares. She whimpered.
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
She turned to walk away but, Ray threw her against the wall and started ti laugh.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
“Why are you so mean, what did I do. Can't we just talk about it!”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“Answer me when I'm talking to you!”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
He started yelling.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
“Yes sir.”
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"Hello."
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita automatically started crying.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (Cont'd)
“You know I can't shake the feeling you haven't truly learned that you think I'm a joke that you think I'm a punk, is that it? Why don't I give you something to cry for.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray stares at Aquita with his cold eyes.
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Ray:
“Ahem... Don't drift off in front of me.”
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Aquita: (Calmly)
"The first baby was named humanity she's long gone
(it hurt worse than any beating and he knew that, he was so cold)
He had made it very clear…"
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (Calmly)
The first baby was named humanity she's long gone
(it hurt worse than any beating and he knew that, he was so cold)
He had made it very clear…
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Aquita:
“Thank you baby for not wearing me out even when I deserved it.”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita looked up at Ray whispered
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“If I can't have you nobody can, just think I will let you leave, no you know too much i’d hate to take our little angel to heaven before her arrival, the choice is yours if you catch my drift, you leave: she dies, you stay: she lives, don't make me a monster and don't do this again you know better. Now what do you have to say?”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray pauses and immediately hugs Aquita.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
“Please don't hit her too?”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray grabs her she snatch away, He balls up his fist and she closes her eyes with her hands on her stomach.
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Both goes quiet and Aquita is staring at the passports.
Stylez added dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
“what is... care to explain?”
Stylez added an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 3)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray throws passports on the bed.
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