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Stylez inserted a transition in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago. Stylez made 21 other changes.
Stylez inserted a transition in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"Go to the room and get cleaned up"
Stylez edited an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
He yanks her up.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (Cont'd)
"It's just you don't have to be insecure... I know better, I know my place, be a good girl like always I wouldn't want to upset you, not on purpose."
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"You know I have a temper the things you make me do, you’ve got heart, I will break you.”
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
"Why you gotta beat before you speak, it's not my fault, you act like I'm...
Stylez edited an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita interrupts Ray while he's talking.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (Cont'd)
"because the time you're livin in is my day, your damn ungrateful, I don't know why I let you stay, but it's okay because you will learn even if I got to punish you every morning, every hour, it's just always something new with you..."
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (Cont'd)
"because the time you're livin in is my day, your damn ungrateful, I don't know why I let you stay, but it's okay because you will learn even if I got to punish you every morning, every hour, it's just always something new with you.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
"why you gotta hurt me baby?"
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"don't you ever jerk away from me!"
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita: (Whimpering)
"Yes baby, I know the things you did last night... you didn't mean to do."
Stylez deleted an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
She whimpers.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray: (CONT'D)
"you know I love you right?"
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"don't talk back to me no-more."
Stylez edited an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray grabs Aquita by the throat.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita:
"You've got issues."
Stylez edited an action in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Aquita screams.
Stylez edited dialogue in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Ray:
"You're my bitch."
Stylez inserted a shot in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
Stylez edited a shot in "Control (Trigger Warning): Chapter 1 (Ep 1)" 9 months ago [view]
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