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EXT-IN TREES-NIGHT

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Tiger hides in the evergreen trees with many boys, watching the house waiting for the right time to raid the Cox household.

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TIger

"The mother is mine. Kill the rest"

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EXT-IN TREES-NIGHT

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Tiger is waiting for instinct to tell him the right time to strike.

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"Now," he said, "we go"

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EXT-IN TREES-NIGHT

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Tiger and the boys who follow him, begin to run toward their targets house. Then with a powerful leap, Tiger then was on the stoop of the house.

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INT-HOUSE-NIGHT

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The boys, no older than seventeen, gather behind Tiger, firing Berettas into the ceiling of the living room, waving hunting knives in the air, and shouting commands.

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TIger (CONT'D)

"You are pitiful" Tiger said. "You cant even protect your family in your own house.

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All the members of the family were corralled in the corner of the living room. Tiger then pushed the youngest of his followers forward. He had the name of Nike and a contagious sense of humor.

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TIger (CONT'D)

"Just do it" Tiger said.

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The eleven year old boy, being fearless, raised his pistol, which was bigger than his own hand, and shot the father of the family square in the forehead. After he shot the father all the other boys shot in the air in approval. The Cox children were crying, holding one another. Another boy wearing a Houston Rockets Jersey Emptied his magazine into a wide-screen television, then reloaded

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KID WEARING JERSEY

"Rock da house!" he shouted

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INT-COX HOUSEHOLD-NIGHT

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The kids came running down the stairs.

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mother cox

"Leave them out of this!" she said "I know who you are"

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TIger

"Of course you do, Mother" Tiger said.

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Tiger smiled at the tall woman. But he had no desire to hurt her. It was just a job to him, a high-paying job one. The Two children scrambled to get to their mother. Tigers boys shot holes into the sofa as one of the little boys squeezes behind it and Tiger grabs the squealing son off the floor with one hand. The young girl in Rugrats pajamas ran up the stairs.

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mother cox

"Go, Baby!" she yelled. "Get out the window! Run! Keep Running!"

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TIger

"Won't happen" he said. "No one gets away from here tonight, Mother."

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mother cox

"Don't do this!" she begged. "Let them go! They're just children!"

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TIger

"You know who I am" he said. "So you know how this will end. You knew all along. Look at what you brought on yourself and ion your family. You did this to them"

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