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BradDev added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010. BradDev made 18 other changes.
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TIger
"You know who I am" he said. "So you know how this will end. You knew all along. Look at what you brought on yourself and ion your family. You did this to them"
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mother cox
"Don't do this!" she begged. "Let them go! They're just children!"
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TIger
"Won't happen" he said. "No one gets away from here tonight, Mother."
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mother cox
"Go, Baby!" she yelled. "Get out the window! Run! Keep Running!"
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Tiger smiled at the tall woman. But he had no desire to hurt her. It was just a job to him, a high-paying job one. The Two children scrambled to get to their mother. Tigers boys shot holes into the sofa as one of the little boys squeezes behind it and Tiger grabs the squealing son off the floor with one hand. The young girl in Rugrats pajamas ran up the stairs.
BradDev added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
Tiger smiled at the tall woman. But he had no desire to hurt her. It was just a job to him, a high-paying job one.
BradDev added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
TIger
"Of course you do, Mother" Tiger said.
BradDev edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
mother cox
"Leave them out of this!" she said "I know who you are"
BradDev added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
mother cox
"Leave them out of this!" she said "
BradDev added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
The kids came running down the stairs.
BradDev added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
INT-COX HOUSEHOLD-NIGHT
BradDev added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
BradDev added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
KID WEARING JERSEY
"Rock da house!" he shouted
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The eleven year old boy, being fearless, raised his pistol, which was bigger than his own hand, and shot the father of the family square in the forehead
BradDev added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
TIger
"Just do it" Tiger said.
BradDev added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
All the members of the family were corralled in the corner of the living room. Tiger then pushed the youngest of his followers forward. He had the name of Nike and a contagious sense of humor.
BradDev added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2010 [view]
TIger
"You are pitiful" Tiger said. "You cant even protect your family in your own house.
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