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jared
Knowing that I'm going to have to pay to see movie now instead of getting paid to watch them is depressing. But it would eventually happen.
(To himself)
A lot sooner than I thought actually.
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mr. Duncan
Well look at that, first time in a long time where your name isn't up there.
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Mr. Duncan is getting angry at the employee on the radio for calling him instead of another department.
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jared
(Sarcastically)
Totally. Never really thought this day would come.
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Jared fixes his shirt and scratches his head, trying to laugh off the fact he screamed.
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Jared gets up and nods his head and walks back inside.
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Jared and the other employee both stare at each other awkwardly, not saying a single word to each other.
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employee #2
(High pitched)
What?!
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jared
Hey, I thought you were going to quit smoking?
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richard cohen
You're going on to bigger and better things. Like changing someone's life, expect for the fact that you'll be an office bitch, but -
(Laughing)
I'm just kidding. But seriously you won't want to miss this place at all.
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jared
Just going to be different not having the free lifestyle, you know?
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Richard Cohen
Where's the office you'll be going to?
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jared
(To himself)
I guess now everything makes senses.
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The employee gets up quickly and heads back to work.
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employee #2
Oh, shit you're right!
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jared
Don't you have somewhere to be?
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employee #2
I don't see why you wouldn't I mean I would totally be down to taking her back to my place and show her the inside of my bed.
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jared
Their meeting with me for the new job on Saturday.
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employee #2
She has anot
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jared
The meeting for the new job is on Saturday. But I can't take her with me, why would I do that?
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Richard Cohen
You're kidding? Oh my god, take her with you. When do you leave?
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employee #2
Well word on the street is that she's in love with you.
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jared
But she's never said anything to me the whole time I've been working here.
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employee #2
She probably wants you, and I mean physically wants you.
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jared
Yes, that's the only Ashley I know that works here. But seriously she's been looking at me like every other second and I can't tell if she's trying to tell me something or not.
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Richard Cohen
Cute Ashley? Working hot foods right now?
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richard cohen
Not enough though.
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jared
But what's up with Ashley man? She's been trying to talk to me all day and she seems like she wants something from me.
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richard cohen (cont'd)
You're so lucky you're getting out of the shit hole. With my luck I might not even find a job until years from now.
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Richard gets up and goes over to the employee and sits down next to him.
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jared
But what's up with Ashley man? She's been trying to talk to me all day and she seems like she wants something from me.
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INT. ext. back of the building - day
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Ashley becomes frustrated with Jared and starts cutting the pizza very firmly.
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Jared nods his head and walks off with Richard.
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jared
(To Ashley)
I'll be right back I'm sorry.
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jared
I... I don't know what you would want me to do.
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ashley
Please, save me from this job!
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jared
Of course.
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Ashley is making a pizza when she notices Jared walking past her.
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Jared grabs a broom and dust pan and heads to exit the stand.
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The customer walks away.
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employee #1
(Whispering to himself)
Really?
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Jared walks over to meet Richard at the register. Ashley turns back around attempting to say something but Jared is too far now.
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richard
(To Employee)
Can I borrow this for a second?
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Ashley is serving popcorn to customers but looking at Jared multiple times. Jared doesn't see.
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Claudia
We came home last night and decided to watch a movie. For the first part of the movie it was fine; but about half way through he starting moving his hand up my leg, I mean that wasn't so bad so I just ignored it. But then I felt his hand starting to go more inward on my leg; I got nervous and pushed him away.
(Beat)
We sat in silence for the rest of the movie. I left right after, but he seemed okay with what happened. I didn't know what to do and now I don't even want to face him anymore.
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