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Scene II Last edited by FoxeyHound, two years ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

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elementary school - day

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1993; long shot of a small town elementary school. Buses are pulling in, and parents are dropping off their children. A minivan pulls up to the drop off entrance, and TWO KIDS (BRIAN and TOM) come out. Before they get far their MOTHER calls for them from the car.

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MOTHER

Oh, Brian! C'mere a moment.

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The older brother stops in his tracks, and shuffles back to the car. Tom other continues towards the entrance.

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MOTHER (CONT'D)

Remember what we talked about last night, sweetie? I don't want to hear a SINGLE bad report from you.

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Brian

I know, mom. I promise I'll be good.

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MOTHER

Good. I love you, sweetie.

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brian

Love you, too.

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He starts walking away.

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MOTHER

And make sure to zip up your jacket at recess, hun.

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Brian

I know, I know.

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INT. 4TH GRADE CLASSROOM - DAY

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Brian enters his classroom where roughly twenty other students are conversing amongst one another and hanging up their coats and backpacks in their CUBBIES. He strides over to his own, where his pal DANIEL KING is storing his belongings in the one next to Brian's.

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daniel

Hey, 'sup?

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brian

Meh, not much. Tired. You?

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daniel

Same here, 'cept one thing,

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brian

What's up?

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daniel

You heard 'bout the new student, right?

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brian

Yeah, what about him?

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daniel

Y'mean HER.

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brian

No, a GIRL?

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daniel

Yep, 'n' she's 'n OUR CLASS.

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brian

I can't believe it, MORE cooties!

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daniel

I know, it makes me sick just thinkin' 'bout—

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MRS. POWELL interrupts the conversation.

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MRS. POWELL (O.S.)

Danny, could I speak with you for a sec'?

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brian

Didjya do your homework?

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daniel

Shoot, I didn't.

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brian

She's gunna be up your butt, man, that's like the tenth time in a row.

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daniel

I know. Well, catchya later.

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brian

You too.

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Daniel walks away. Brian just chuckles a bit and shakes his head; his views on girls are completely opposite of Daniel's.

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brian (CONT'D)

I hope she's cute.

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We see Mrs. Powell (mid-fourties; long red hair the reaches the middle of her back and big brown eyes) hush the class and get them to settle down into their desks.

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MRS. POWELL

Ahem! Class! Eyes up front, and listen up, please!

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The kids' chatter stops.

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MRS. POWELL (CONT'D)

Now, as you may or may not have already heard, Pleviak Elementary recently enrolled a new student. And it's a great pleasure to have her in my class, so please give a nice, warm welcome to Sarah Wilhelm!

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Mrs. Powell turns to the door and gestures for the new student to come in. We see SARAH WILHELM walk into the room very shyly. With light brown hair and hazel green eyes, she's adorable and gorgeous. She is also very feeble looking, delicate as a flower.

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We see Brian, who's mouth is gaping in awe, and eyes transfixed on the beautiful new student.

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BRIAN

(Whispering to himself) Woooooooow!

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Sarah stops in front of the class. It's clear to us and the students that she is apprehensive and nervous. She speaks in a soft tone.

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SARAH

H-Hi, I'm S-Sarah.

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STUDENTS

(Simultaneously) Hello, Sarah Wilhelm.

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MRS. POWELL

Sarah, could you tell us a few things about yourself?

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SARAH

Umm . . . I j-just m-m-m-mooved here f-fr-from W-W-Wiscons-sin, and . . . I d-don't know wh-wh-what t-t-t-t-to s-s-say.

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MRS. POWELL

That's alright, you don't have to say anymore. Does anybody have any questions for Miss Wilhelm?

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A kid named BILLY in the front row blurts out his question right away.

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BILLY

What's wrong with your talkin'? Why d'ya speak so funny?

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Sarah sort of lowers her head, and steps back a hair.

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MRS. POWELL

Billy! She's very nervous!

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BILLY

How wuz I s'pose t' know? I thought she wuz stoopehd or somethin'.

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MRS. POWELL

BILLY! You apologize to our new student right now!

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BILLY

Sorry.

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SARAH

It's o-ok-k-kay.

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MRS. POWELL

Now, anymore questions?

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The children remain silent.

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MRS. POWELL (CONT'D)

Okay, now, uhhh, Sarah? You see the cubby all the way in the back? You can put everything in there. And as for a desk, let's see . . . Ah, yes, that one right next to Brian, in the last row, 'kay?

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Brian's expression switches instantly from lovestruck awe, to bashful nervousness. As Sarah goes to puts her stuff away and Mrs. Powell talks about the homework assigned the night before, Brian WRINGS his hands and SQUIRMS in his seat a little.

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Sarah walks over and takes a seat next to Brian. He clears his throat a bit then boldly says something.

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BRIAN

H-H-Hi, I'm B-Brian.

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Sarah blushes and giggles, which in turn makes Brian blush immensely.

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SARAH

H-Hello.

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BRIAN

And I th-think you're b-b-buh-b-buh—

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SARAH

Yes?

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BRIAN

. . . Beautiful

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The two kids faces burn bright red, and Sarah giggles a bit.

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SARAH

You're sweet.

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Brian sighs lovingly. Suddenly there's a tiny noise of water, as we see Sarah look down at Brian a bit, and start to laugh. He snaps out of his daze, and realizes that he is peeing his pants.

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BRIAN

AH SHIT!

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MRS. POWELL

I beg your pardon, Brian?!

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The rest of the students turn and notice Brian's urine stained pants. Everybody BURSTS into hysterical laughter, even Sarah. Brian hangs his head embarrassed and SPRINTS out of the classroom, SLAMMING the door shut.

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INT. BEDROOM - MORNING - PRESENT DAY

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Adult Brian SNAPS out of his slumber.

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brian

AAHHHH!

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He sits in his bed, HEAVING in and out, until realizing it was a dream. He lies back down, resting for a moment before rolling out of bed. Getting up, he quickly sees his pee stained boxer briefs and bed sheets.

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BRIAN (CONT'D)

Son of a bitch!

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credit sequence: "Sordid"

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