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We're inside a bar owned by mobster BIG BEN. We see a group of people sitting at a poker table, talking LOUDLY as they play Texas Hold 'Em. They are JIMMY, LAUREN, VERONICA, MARK, WYATT, FRANK, JENNIFER, and Sarah Wilhelm. Everyone is looking at Wyatt and Lauren, who are the only one's left in the round. There is total silence other than the ROCk music in the background.
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Mother
Don't get all concerned about me; I'll be alright. Just forget about this.
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She smiles, giving Brian a PECK on the cheek. Brian smiles back sympathetically, but is still deep in thought. They sit there for a minute, watching the TV. We hear the toilet flush in the bathroom.
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mother
No, sweetheart. I guess I'm just passing through some sort of a mid-life crisis.
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BRian
. . . Are you on some different medication or something, mom?
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mother
. . . I always need to pee right after one of those moments, too.
(chuckles)
Very strange.
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Mother
It's a paradox. I remember when you were a little boy. Tommy, too. And it feels like just yesterday, yet . . . . . . and yet simultaneously, it feels as if those days were a very long time ago. 15 years is a long time, but it feels even longer than that. Centuries, millenniums, eons. Please, stop me if I'm boring you. I don't mean to ramble.
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BRIAN
. . . What do you mean?
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mother
You ever realize how slow, yet how fast time goes by.
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Mother
Time is a paradox, Bry.
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MOTHER
Oh! My babies! Come here, you two!
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mother
You two won't believe who stopped by a few weeks ago, boys! Mr. and Mrs. Fleischhacker!
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mother
Serious!
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mother
Oooookay, could have told me a little differently but that's okay. Make sure to turn the fan on!
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mother
Sweetie, what are you doing? You're making me nervous just standing there.
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An awkward moment of silence.
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TOM
Damn straight.
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gets up out of the armchair.
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Mary chuckles. Tom gets up out of the armchair.
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gets up out of the armchair.
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TOM
Yeah, we were the "Three Musketqueers."
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MARY CALLANDKSI
I'm surprised that you three don't hang out anymore. Jimbo was like my other son, and your other brother.
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BRIAN
Well, boys will be boys.
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mother
Dear God, you three used to make me worry so much.
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brian
OH RIGHT, RIGHT, HAHA!
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TOM
OH YEAH! We'd roll down the hill in that thing for hours and hours. Jim ended up smashing into that huuuuge tree!
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BRIAN
Yeah, and Jim smashed his back against that tree!
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BRIAN
. . . Hey, remember when we found that old barrel and we rolled down that hill? Was that with Jim?
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tom
I'm not surprised, I always thought he'd join the military.
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mother
He's doing well, very well. You know he's in the marine corps now.
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brian
Oh yeah, Jimbo! Now I remember. How's he doing?
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TOM
Jimbo was here, too?!
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MOTHER
He was with them, too.
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tom
They were our next door neighbors for the longest time, dude! Remember there son James, we would hang with him all the time.
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brian
...They sound familiar, but I don't recall...
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Brian looks kind of confused.
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MARY CALLANDSKI
Serious!
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BRIAN
Of course I remember them! Haven't seen either of them in years!
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TOM
Nuh-uh, are you serious?
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MARY CALLANDSKI (CONT'D)
You two won't believe who stopped by a few weeks ago, boys! Mr. and Mrs. Fleischhacker!
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Brian, Tom, and their mother all sit together in the little living room, the television has SATURDAY MORNING CARTOONS on. They all sip on tea.
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INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
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C.U. on an apartment door. It opens, and we see the brother's elderly mother.
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INT. APARTMENT - day
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Tom just shakes his head and sits there with an annoyed demeanor, while Brian continues laughing.
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TOM
What the fuck's your deal?!
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BRIAN
I'm just imagining Superman bangin' Lois Lane, with him being premature, and all.
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TOM
Well whatever man, you get the point!
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BRIAN
So what you're tryin' to say is that Superman's premature?
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TOM
No, I mean he makes the girl that he's fucking—Never mind. All I'm trying to say is—
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