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Effector added a comment to Death and Bereavement on 10/31/2013. more
so far so good. brilliant if you ask me. excellent opening and nice word play. Only I don't understand why Isaac speaks up after Jacob (in the opening) while Goldie should have.. maybe it was just a random call by Jacob but is that a mistake? otherwise, 10/10 cheers!
Yonaremer1 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/31/2013. Yonaremer1 made 7 other changes. more
Four young recent college graduates sit formally dressed in an idling car, generic pop music plays softly. ADAM sits in the driver seat, JACOB in the passenger seat, ISAAC and GOLDIE in the backseat.
Yonaremer1 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/31/2013. Yonaremer1 made 34 other changes. more
Graciela (cont'd)
come in, everyone is in the living room.
Yonaremer1 edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 10/30/2013. Yonaremer1 made 5 other changes. more
INT. Int. - car - day
 

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