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sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011. sonicofhire made 48 other changes.
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
arragon about to destroy us
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
uh what's that
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suddenly a giant red ball grows in the sky.
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
chris
oh really and who's going to make us
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
yup, and now you guys are coming with me
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
was that command
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radio transmission.
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
good and i also wanna have a chat with the professor anyway
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
operator
(sigh)
the professor is going to piseed about this one
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zack
it was a dead end all we found were some nukes but those exploded along with our ride, i met a few recovers on the way, they help me out, well sort of one of them need's help, think you can beam us up
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
it was a dead end all we found were some nukes but those exploded along with our ride, i met a few recovers on the way, they help me out, well sort of
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
operator
and the weapon
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
copy that command, i've just come across some guys who work for arragon
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
operator
come in agent marco, this the mother of gia in the venus sector, do you read
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radio transmission.
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
alfredo
daniel stop talking gibberish
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
daniel (barley speaking)
book mack vossh!
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
well at least some of us are
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
daniel (barley speaking)
ack! back! vook!
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
don't be so negative, at least were alive
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
oh sure, now we got some alien landlord after us, that is some victory
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
well that takes care of them
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jose growls and runs with buddah
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
enough go back to your master now before i kill you both
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jose
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
buddah
hey jose,now that the others are dead does that mean we can try and be freinds?
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
(sigh)
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gaberiel
and you too
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
gaberiel, were suppose to insult them not us
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gabe
oh yeah will f us
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jose
no capt,n, you'll pay for this you bloody whipper snappers, just wait till lord arragon here's about this
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
nick
ahahaha look at daniel he can barley speak, he's like a kid with autism except this time people aren't afraid to make fun of him
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
daniel (barley speaking)
ack!, back! vok!
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
announcer
alright k.o!
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the screen flashes ko sign
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captain fury
i've always hated you, yuo fucking priiiiick
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
jose
what?
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captain fury
it's just that, i always hated you
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alfredo
again with the british accent
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
jose
what is it capt'n
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
captain fury
(cough)
good by my fellow teammates i hope you live well, and always remember this jose for the rest of your life
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
jose
captain, no please, you can't leave me here captain, not with buddah anything but that!
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the captain and vic explode, fury lays on the ground slowly dying
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the captain and vic explode
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
captain fury
i'm... going to die,
(looks at the sky)
some where over the raiinbow-
sonicofhire added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/17/2011 [view]
zack
yeah oops, as in oops i dodge that attack looks your going to explode
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captain fury
oops
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vic
this technique automatically makes me stick to a person, and i also forgot i always use clones so i don't die by the explosion oops
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