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GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011. GhostAndTheClown made 78 other changes.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
CLOSE ON
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
CLAIRE
No his face is all swollen and he keeps throwing up.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Other 2
He just smoked too much.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Other 1
What's wrong with him?
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POV ED
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Ed opens his eyes to see a blurry Claire and OTHERS he does not recognize
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
claire o.s.
Ed! Ed? Are you ok?
GhostAndTheClown inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
FADE OUT
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BLACK
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INT. LIVING ROOM - HOURS LATER
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INT. LIVING ROOM - LATER
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Seated next to the couple, Ed falls asleep.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
He likes it. Ed finishes the bowl at lightning speed and joins the rest of the group in the living room.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
BEAT
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Ed eats the spoonful of Jakai Bableves.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
CLOSE ON
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire laughs really hard in slow motion and hugs the guy that gave her coke.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
POV ED
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Ed holds a spoonful of Jakai Bableves and looks at it. Curious. Ed looks in the direction of the living room.
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
INT. KITCHEN - SIMULTANEOUS
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INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
INT.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire does a line of coke.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire
Yea yea yea.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire switches couches and sits next to the guy.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
GUY
Claire.
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire skates off to the living room and sits next to the couple on the couch and gives them a dirty look.
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
The party is dimly lit and not very crowded. On the couch, a couple hooks up full swing one on top of the other. On the coffee table, a GUY cuts white powder into piles for himself and his FRIEND. This place is dark and dangerous. Claire and Ed enter the party. Ed has tunnel vision as he stalks to the kitchen. Claire follows. As they pass, people look at Ed confused by his existence.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire skates off to the living room and sits next to the couple on the couch.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire
I don't eat canned food.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Can
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POV CLAIRE
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire looks at the can.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Ed
Aren't you having some?
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire removes the Bowl puts a spoon in it and hands it to Ed.
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MICROWAVE BEEPS
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claire
You don't love me.
GhostAndTheClown added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
ED
Yes.
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claire
Weed makes me horny.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire embraces Ed and stands on her tippie toes.
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire takes the can and opens it with one fluid motion. Ed watches - astonished. Claire finds a microwave safe bowl in a cabinet and dumps the contents in. She tastes the cold Jokai Bableves. Gross.
GhostAndTheClown inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
The party is dimly lit and not very crowded. On the couch, a couple hooks up full swing. On the coffee table, a GUY cuts white powder into piles for himself and his FRIEND. This place is dark and dangerous. Claire and Ed enter the party. Ed has tunnel vision as he stalks to the kitchen. Claire follows. As they pass, people look at Ed confused by his existence.
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire takes the can and opens it with one fluid motion. Ed watches - astonished. Claire finds a microwave safe bowl in a cabinet
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire takes the can and opens it with one fluid motion.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Ed opens it and pulls out a can opener. He tries to open the can but his motor functions are very poor.
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
DRAWER
GhostAndTheClown added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
CLOSE ON
GhostAndTheClown edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
Claire and Ed enter the party. Ed has tunnel vision as he stalks to the kitchen. Claire follows.
GhostAndTheClown inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2011 [view]
INT. LIVING ROOM PARTY - CONTINUOUS
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